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[cosmicchrist]

Spring flight

The insects take flight above me
    electrons orbiting
    an invisible nucleus

The hawks take flight
    drawing circles
    in the endless sky
    only to do as hawks do

The trees take flight
    only for a moment though
    their seeds rain down
    land on my head,
    a blanket for the ground

I take flight
    on this day
    a journey of the

Comments

[okkoto]

first two stanzas are good, they are solid images