Reborn! fic [FAIL], part III

[cosmonaut_00]

Part I. 
Part II.

When she wakes up in her bed, she doesn't wonder how she got there because the previous night comes back to her in mortifying detail.  Her cheeks burn as she relives some of the finer points.  "Wii? What the hell is that, Haru?" The name of the console is lost on her, but the innuendo isn't.

"What's that about a Wii?"  Haru jumps

Comments

[etoilecp]

This is SUPER AWESOME! I just love the idea of her wanting to give a verbal apology, yet is uncertain about it. Loved the last line as well~

[cosmonaut_00]

Thanks again! And I'm really looking forward to your new fic that you mentioned ;)

[deidarakun]

XDDDD
I just love 5986 <3
so sad that there arent a lot of 5986 around ;;

Really liked it XD
lol speedial 8D

[cosmonaut_00]

oh man I know, the scarcity of this pairing makes me cry with frustration.

glad you liked it! haha yeah, speedial...I'm lame like that :D

thanks for reading!! <3

[dame_batsie]

I love this! Her hesitation and the way he slowly begins to take initiative. Yay!

[cosmonaut_00]

thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it, and thanks for reading. <3

[makeste]

Heh, when I see 5986 in a fanfic description, I'm on it like a moth to a flame, because you're absolutely right--there's not enough of it. XD

Anyway, I like this. :) Gokudera in particular is nicely IC (aside from the minor nitpick of his attending a university away from Tsuna, which I can't really picture happening, but doesn't really take away from the fic in general). And I very much like how you're developing his relationship with Haru; nice and gradual, and awkward as hell, but with that oddly sweet undertone of caring despite themselves.

I assume this is still ongoing (though the last line would be a great place to end things either way)? If so, I'm looking forward to more; if not, thanks for sharing this. <3

[cosmonaut_00]

Haha, I could see both Haru and Gokudera being completely invested in getting Tsuna into an amazing school with them, and being totally bummed when he doesn't get in. But you're right, short of Tsuna sending Gokudera away, I can't see them being separated, either.

I had more planned after this, but the rest still needs some editing and tweaking, so for now I'm calling it good. But eventually (hopefully soon), I would like to give this a more solid ending.

Thanks for the lovely comment and thank you for reading; I've seen your comments floating around on basically every 5986 fic out there, so it's really flattering for me to get one from you, too. <3 <3

[napposamba]

He hangs his car keys on the hook by the door where Haru keeps her room key, and the arrangement feels oddly right to her.

I found that line really cute <3. It's nice to actually see het fics here. KHR het pairings need more love. Great work and keep on writing het to the EXTREME XD!

[cosmonaut_00]

Thank you so, so much! I agree; KHR het is extremely rare and definitely needs more play, haha.

Thanks for reading TO THE EXTREME :D! Much appreciated <3 <3