Comments | cosmopolitan411: AP/HG one-shot: Of a Ruination

cosmopolitan411

AP/HG one-shot: Of a Ruination

Aug 19, 2010 20:19

Disclaimer: The characters and canon situations in the following story belong solely to JK Rowling. I am not making any money from the publishing or writing of this story.

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Of a Ruination

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Summary: He baffled her, and she wasn’t sure whether he was a mystery she even wanted to understand.

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Author’s Note: this is a one-shot ( Read more... )

ap/hg, prompt, challenge

Comments 6

svelterose August 20 2010, 01:36:30 UTC

I LOVE this. I love how you made Adrian so wholly arrogant and confident, I found it charming. You're not supposed to find arrogance charming but damn if he didn't make it sound a whole boatload of fun. You definitely got that idea from him - life isn't about regrets. Totally wish I could be in Hermione's shoes right now! And of course, I loved the way you wrote her. Successful, hardworking, and still a little bit of the know-it-all that won't ever go away which is great because that's the Hermione we love. ;]

:D :D Love love LOVED it!

cosmopolitan411 August 20 2010, 02:55:50 UTC

oh thank you, I really appreciate it! I'm not all that familiar with the pairing (only ever having read it by inell and absolutely adoring it, but never having luck finding it elsewhere... and I'm rambling, sorry) so I was a bit flustered by it. I am glad that you like it though sine that was my primary goal here. THANK YOU!

juicylover09 August 20 2010, 02:22:21 UTC

*squees* I need to go thank svelterose for this rec immediately.

First off I adore Adrian especially with Hermione.. To be honest I knew I was going to enjoy this story from the very first line :).

I LOL'ed at the part about the minister being a pansy.

I hope to see more of this pairing from you!

cosmopolitan411 August 20 2010, 02:58:00 UTC

oh thank you, that's incredibly kind of you! I'm not familiar with this pairing all that much so I just kind of wrote him as I imagined which was liberating albeit scary since I just hoped that Sveltrose would like it, given that she requested the pairing for my challenges request.

thanks again,
cosmo

cosmopolitan411 August 20 2010, 13:38:00 UTC

p.s. I forgot to mention this, but if you have requests, feel free to post here: http://cosmopolitan411.livejournal.com/20379.html

elliesmeow August 20 2010, 14:17:01 UTC

Very nice. I liked getting know them both better through your fic. Thanks for posting!:)

-Ellie