[Naruto][LeeGaa/GaaLee][The Trick is to Keep Breathing]

[cotton_whistle]

Title : The Trick Is To Keep Breathing
Pairings : LeeGaa/GaaLee
Type : Oneshot
Word Count : 3771
Rating : PG-13ish
Disclaimers : NARUTO © Kishimoto et al. Title from song by Garbage.
Warnings : Spoilers for episodes before time skip.

Author’s Notes:
Situated during the time skip. Special thanks to my beta reader,

Comments

[raccoonofyouth]

Blarble! This was wonderful. It was a little strange and hitchy in the flow in some parts, but that's probably just me. I really liked it!

(Fav part: Lee's '...EH!?')

[cotton_whistle]

Thank you. I appreciate it. I'll re-read to check out the flow, who knows, it might be me. ^^;

[slashfiendchiru]

I really enjoyed reading this! It's not often I see LeeGaa fics that don't make me want to roll my eyes, but I really liked your characterization. I always appreciate a sincere effort made on the authors part to make their plots believable.

[cotton_whistle]

You know, when I first started to write this fic, I was going to make NC-17. Well, you know what that means! But two thousand words down, I just couldn't do it. ^^ For fear of OOC-ness, I slowed it way down.

I'm glad I did it this way, though. Thank you for the comments!

[redalmond]

Ah, it was very nice to read well-written GaaLee fanfiction. I thought the two were very IC with some parts that I'm not sure of, and I'll try to leave a better review some other time because it's so late now xO I'll just say that I really enjoyed reading this, and I hope I'll see more from you someday :)

[cotton_whistle]

Don't worry about it, I appreciate the review all the same. ^^

Thank you!

[cotton_whistle]

Ah, yes... Neji just doesn't strike me as the huggable sort (I've to admit, I love his angst ^^;).

And... I don't mind rambling, in fact, I love it. I love knowing what people think about my stories and how they come off to others, because it'll definitely help me in writing future fics.

Thank you for the review, I only posted this a couple of days ago, really, I appreciate it. ^^

[rice_kracker]

Very, very good story. Lee and Gaara are really in-character, and everything is just so well-written with good details. I also liked the inspirational ending. Hope you'll write more sometime!

[cotton_whistle]

Thank you!

I will definitely write more now that I've established their relationship in a way. ^^