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Sep 04, 2011 01:51

[The writing is a touch more... calligraphic than Souji's usual. But poetry demands it, even if it's not his own. And even if it's awful.]

Of the seven spring herbs
five I have
put to memory.

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azhdarchidae September 4 2011, 21:10:43 UTC
Huh?

[She's never heard of haiku.]

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coughcoughshank September 4 2011, 22:19:53 UTC
Haiku!

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azhdarchidae September 5 2011, 00:38:06 UTC
What-ku?

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coughcoughshank September 5 2011, 00:44:02 UTC
It's a kind of poetry.

Usually they're better than that one, though. Like-

old pond . . .
a frog leaps in
water’s sound

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notpissedoff September 4 2011, 21:52:23 UTC
Is this what I think it is?

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coughcoughshank September 4 2011, 22:19:44 UTC
Maybe~

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notpissedoff September 5 2011, 00:57:54 UTC
...

Why?

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coughcoughshank September 5 2011, 01:01:44 UTC
Because they're funny!

[WHY ELSE]

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feathered_earth September 5 2011, 00:10:02 UTC
Is this a poem?

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coughcoughshank September 5 2011, 00:18:39 UTC
It is!

Not a very good one, though, ne?

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feathered_earth September 5 2011, 03:06:16 UTC
If you say so. I don't know very much about poetry.

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coughcoughshank September 5 2011, 05:35:47 UTC
Well. I don't think memorizing seven herbs should be that hard!

Or there's this one-

Though there be but one
A plum blossom will aways
Be a plum blossom

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longnosedliar September 5 2011, 01:35:21 UTC
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I don't get it.

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coughcoughshank September 5 2011, 02:05:59 UTC
I don't either! Whoever wrote it must have had a really bad memory though.

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longnosedliar September 5 2011, 18:23:34 UTC
So you didn't write it?

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coughcoughshank September 5 2011, 21:52:01 UTC
No, I found it on the fourth floor.

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desertshadows September 7 2011, 10:20:38 UTC
Very nice.

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coughcoughshank September 8 2011, 00:50:15 UTC
You think so? The meaning seems a bit silly to me.

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desertshadows September 10 2011, 10:51:29 UTC
I do wonder why the writer hasn't put the other two to memory yet! But it is nice in itself.

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coughcoughshank September 10 2011, 20:38:47 UTC
He must have kind of a bad memory, I guess.

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