Leavin'

Nov 02, 2013 11:49

Title: Leavin'
Author: countingcr0ws
Pairing/ Characters: Yunjae
Rating: R
Form: One-shot
Genre: AU, Plain Ridiculousness, Romance, Slice of Life
Summary: Jaejoong takes the seat opposite Yunho.
Inspired by: Leavin' by Jesse Mccartney

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kiboushinjitsu November 3 2013, 01:17:47 UTC
I won't leave him alone either!

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countingcr0ws November 3 2013, 15:30:58 UTC
Until you get a proper sexy time right! Lol. Omg you just made me think of like yh being a puppy or smth, and he's following JJ. Omg. Does that make us puppies too? :/
At least puppies get to sit on his lap. :/
Hahah. Thank you for leaving a comment at all. :/ and stopping by D;

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ligerliger November 3 2013, 03:37:38 UTC
omg spot

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countingcr0ws November 3 2013, 14:40:32 UTC
I'm looking forward to the day where I get a blurry proof shot and am made to analyse Jaejoong's nipples.
/just saying.

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ligerliger November 4 2013, 01:05:46 UTC
now I feel compelled to send you various shots of Jaejoong naked.

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countingcr0ws November 4 2013, 02:11:06 UTC
No no. Not that that wasn't sexy, but proof shot after sex. Like his sexy buddies took photos and it got leaked, and everybody starts to argue like if its Jaejoong or otherwise via his goosebummy nipples like how they're doing with Junsu, lol. But wow. I wouldn't mind Angela. Because from the picture, you evidently have good tastes! ;D

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tardiskeeper November 3 2013, 03:38:50 UTC
The juxtaposition of how Yunho read the news to how he was devouring Jae with his eyes was lovely. He was skimming through the world events with minimum commentary but when it came to appraise Jae first thing in the morning well he took his sweet time and did it with such ample vocabulary that sensualized every breath Jae took.
Jae knows Yunho's libido and mind all to well enough to know how to play his cards right so really I don't think he minds much. His words may say to the contrary, but his eyes were clearly showing amusement and delight (Yunho wasn't the only one admiring). Fine dinning first thing in the morning what fun what a way to start the day, but Yunho really he might injure himself without any clothes on. Let him keep the shirt at least, though I bet he'd rather have Jae wear him.
Gotta say that the bit of shyness at the beginning was endearing though his dominant side reared its head soon enough. Wouldn't have him any other way.
Thank you!

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countingcr0ws November 3 2013, 15:51:53 UTC
I think I'm starting to anticipate your comments. Like it's what I wait for; like an ice cream truck on a hot summer's day. :/ it's scary, almost dangerous, I swear, this reliance and expectation, haha. But that said, you always send me reading my stories again :/ it's like I just did my readings (more then forty times over) and I set off for school brimming with confidence and the teacher somehow drained it all, lol. Kick ass stuff, really ( ... )

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tardiskeeper November 7 2013, 20:10:15 UTC
WOAH ice cream truck that's a compliment I've never heard, thanks! You're subconscious is probably doing all the layout without you even blinking and it pours out into your stories. Gurrrl you is a genius and ya ain't even know it. lol!

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geno_c_ide November 3 2013, 12:30:58 UTC
*sob* lovely piece of smut. and jae is such a kitten (although he will forever be a bunny to me).

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countingcr0ws November 3 2013, 15:35:22 UTC
LOL, where did the bunny come from! You just made me think of the edits. You know the Mirotic one where they added the ears? Lol. And eh, he's too pretty to be a fluffy bunny. The confident sexuality he oozes is just staggering I swear.

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countingcr0ws November 3 2013, 15:36:05 UTC
Oh shoot. And thank you for stopping by to read and leave a comment too! ;A;/ /ugly crying

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geno_c_ide November 4 2013, 00:23:05 UTC
i don't even know. just that he's a bunny to me, although a lot of people consider him a cat which is nice as well. but i really consider Jae a bunny. i don't really know why, lolz. and no problem. it's always my pleasure to read your work. XD

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hujanbiru November 3 2013, 19:46:55 UTC
Love it as always^^

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countingcr0ws November 4 2013, 02:16:02 UTC
Hahah, thank you. Lol. I actually laughed through my sleep addled haze. Hahah. Thank you. ;D /goes back to sleep, lol. But really. Thank you for reading and commenting. ;A;/

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