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The Wrong Way Home

Feb 03, 2014 13:02

Title: The Wrong Way Home
Author: countingcr0ws
Beta: irisleejin
Pairing/ Characters: Yunjae
Rating: R
Form: One-shot
Genre: ARs in AU, Generally Happy, Mild Supernatural, Romance, Slice-of-Life
Warnings: Headcanon with too much poetic license, Non-con sex
Summary: Jaejoong’s brash. There’s no place quite like home without Yunho, but he has pushed his sanctuary away. As ( Read more... )

Comments 35

donud February 3 2014, 05:15:53 UTC

haahhaha baby! you're so FUNNY! i'm going for my spot first.. i'll be back in no time.. i'm sorry i can't read it right away for now

countingcr0ws February 3 2014, 05:19:25 UTC

omg, hahhaha. you're super fast, like omg, haha.
i honestly hope that you don't end up with like tons of questions marks and then boycott me forever, erm. seriously tho. serious. this story is incoherency at its finest. but thank you for commenting so quickly! hahaha. i'm already stupidly happy, lol.

donud February 4 2014, 06:43:22 UTC

Seriously dude.. You must keep continuing writing. You must. I demands it from you LOL

You makes me cry again girl.. I read it while the TV showing Katy Perry's Unconditionally and Christina Perri's Thousands Year

And you can imagine how fit the songs to this fic. Man.. Please keep writing. I love it so fucking much! I'm so glad I made a decision to messaging you that day.. Bc babe.. This is so brilliant.. I love it!!!!! And I love you!!!!

YH oh god YH.. He's an angel

countingcr0ws February 4 2014, 09:22:28 UTC

Omg. Hahahaha. Yeah, man. I've never listened to those to songs, but I was like oh hay, the titles sound fitting. And haha. Yeah, they sure do. And omg. I'm glad that they made you cry. Because I swear I was crying my ass off as I wrote it, like omg, ikr?? But yeah. Idk man. I think i spent a a good time thinking about their reactions and feelings so it hit me hard and I swear, dude, I'm thankful that you did, too. Haha. I would have been thick skinned enough and fine with not writing anything my entire winter break. Lol. /faildom. And I swear that I'm glad that you liked it. QAQ. I love it so much, bu I simultaneously dislike it because it's so messy. :(

jaan30 February 3 2014, 06:05:02 UTC

Wow this is really deep/complex and omg my heart! It's so sad T.T why did it have to take so long? It seems like Jaejoong realized his mistakes right away... I can really feel how much he loves Yunho (his Yunho) *sigh* You're right I might have to read it again^^ I'm glad they finally fixed things in the end. Thanks for sharing!

countingcr0ws February 3 2014, 06:11:24 UTC

I was thinking like how do you put it, like he knows that he's wrong and all that, that he shouldn't be so quick to anger anymore, but he needs a while to incorporate it into his character. And like in a sense even if he's okay with it, professionally he'd still want more, like to have Yunho in harmony and things like that, and idk sm's still having Yunho and I was thinking like he's too tired and bitter to brother with them and he doesn't think that he can control himself if sm tries to pull Yunho away. And in a sense, imo he does change as he grows older and yeah, man. Eight years is a long time. What an idiot. Seriously. And he was too scared to find Yunho explicitly, but one day, it just happens kind of thing.
And goodness. Thank you for dropping by, and I'm glad that it didn't bamboozle you. :OO

rjaejoo February 3 2014, 06:24:26 UTC

I like how this is written. It took me a moment to catch on, and it is definitely a piece that you can discover/realize more if you reread it. Sometimes those are the best though.

countingcr0ws February 3 2014, 09:34:18 UTC

Shit. I'm sorry, ugh. I just don't know how to slide the whole 'oh hey, I'm in another parallel universe' thing in nicely without making it look clumsy.
And :< thank you for still saying that it's not thattt bad, ugh. I swear that its 2/10 for execution, ugh. Thank you for reading (and possibly rereading), :OO

dilovesyunjae February 3 2014, 08:12:38 UTC

A bit confusing at first but then I finally got it. I think. N woah it sure took a long time for jj to change or rather be a better person for himself n for yunho. N gosh I want yunho all to myself. He waited for jj.

countingcr0ws February 3 2014, 09:42:18 UTC

Was it terrible like 'oh man, what the heck is going on mannnn?/??' Kind of thing? Ugh I'm sorry for the bad writing, and erm yeah, man. In my brain, I kinda think like during the period Jaejoong wanted Yunho to find somebody, like as much as he wants Yunho, he's scared that he'd ruin it again, and it's the waiting, the separation that compounds it all. Like throughout the years, he's slowly raising their relationship on a pedestal, and like it scares him even more to find Yunho, and in my head, Yunho's kinda walking with a hole in his chest, and he roams about trying to fit people in to no avail, and he pretends that he doesn't know what's wrong with everything because he's scared too, like imo Yunho would blame himself for not leaving, and he feels like he can't ever be what JJ wants, so he kinda drifts, and WHAM, erm, coffee shop, Jaejoong gets his Yunho delivered to him on a platter, Yunho finds the right shape that'll plug his chest hole, and the whole gig's back dancing to the Yunjae tune erm what am I rambling about. But yeah. ( ... )

dilovesyunjae February 3 2014, 10:29:31 UTC

It wasnt terrible for me, I felt like 'erm did I misd something somewhere?' Anyway aww I love it when you say yunho is drifting with a hole in his heart. Shit, why are you making me love yunho even more? And why cant ppl write more sensitive self sacrificing yunho! Waeeee???!!!! Err...sorry for that keyboard vomit.

countingcr0ws February 3 2014, 14:55:20 UTC

Lol. There's a lot of sensitive self sacrificing Yunho out there right. Haha. Case in point: Damaged. Anyway, I honestly think that that classification wouldn't be too hard because Yunho's pretty much that imo. Idk. :(
And I'm sorry for the mess. :(

chikazukenai February 3 2014, 13:54:30 UTC

This, dear author, has quite instantly become one of my favourite Yunjae fics ever. Ever.

countingcr0ws February 3 2014, 14:52:22 UTC

ARE YOU SERIOUS. I WAS LIKE '/Flopping onto side. Man, am I bored. Let me check if I got any comments. Oh, the number jumped. /gets a little excited. /stifles it immediately while mumbling to self unhappily about how awkward this whole story is ( ... )

chikazukenai February 5 2014, 17:52:54 UTC

Gurrlllll, what are you on and where can I get some? LOL!
Dead serious, I am. Heck, I generally don't comment on fics (bad silent reader, I know, I know >.<) but I was just compelled to leave one. That's how much this fic affected me ( ... )

countingcr0ws February 17 2014, 05:26:50 UTC

Erm I'm on losershit. :/ haha. I'm sorry for replying so late (LJ app went down and any updates just get swallowed in my inbox with all the detox/hug updates) and you should comment more! :D its nice, and I always comment whenever its good like I mean slogging is hard, haha. And im sorry for the late reply. :(