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Paper Lies

Mar 08, 2014 07:50

Title: Paper Lies
Author: countingcr0ws
Pairing/ Characters: Yunjae
Rating: PG
Form: One-shot
Genre: AR, Cavity Inducing, Ridiculously Happy, Romance, Slice-of-Life
Summary: Jaejoong's on a quest to find his ideal girlfriend while he engages Yunho on the side for personal entertainment.
Inspired by: Clover (Otsu Hiyori) Manga

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Comments 95

rjaejoo March 8 2014, 00:16:16 UTC

This is cute. Like the length of it too, just right for me today. :)

countingcr0ws March 8 2014, 04:43:50 UTC

Haha I guess that you're saying that because apart from the first time jump, it was pretty much a smooth transition but haha, this was 7k plus like I actually fell asleep while editing this yesterday and I had to take time from days to write this, lol. Its pretty long just that it doesn't feel like it, haha. And eh! Were the others of weird length! Omg. Such a weird question but haha. Yeah! Three k's kinda the average for me, I guess. This was more than twice it. :O and heehee. Thank you for dropping by! And I'm gonna go do my work now like ugh.

rjaejoo March 8 2014, 06:07:57 UTC

Nah the lengths are cool. I'm just fighting a bad cold and it was just the right length for me to read before I passed out. Lol. Honestly though I appreciated the time jump b/c I didnt feel like I needed to know everything in between. Btw Jae's description of what he needs from Yunho is the best. Lol. Had me cracking up!

countingcr0ws March 8 2014, 07:09:40 UTC

i suddenly thought about flannels and how google images give plaid prints as flannel and i suddenly got annoyed. sorry. like i was reading your comment about the whole stuff in between part, and i guess yeah. i had a writing crisis period where i read a lot of how to write books and they said the same thing, and erm idek what i'm saying either and you should really take care of yourself, erm medicine (ugh, antihistamines make me feel woozy when i wake up) and haha, thanks. /i'm like smiling stupidly at my laptop, hahaha. /weirdo alert.

minesomine March 8 2014, 00:20:34 UTC

I really liked this. So funny and sweet. I wanna hug these two silly idiots.

countingcr0ws March 8 2014, 04:46:08 UTC

Haha. Thanks. I guess the Jaejoong here would probably yell and be like Yunho's the idiot and omg I just remembered that I'll be having pizza for dinner, and omg, I'm like excited and this is so irrelevant, like omg. Haha. I'm glad that it gave you happy feels though! Haha. You should drop by the comic if you do read mangas because I swear that I didn't do it much justice and if you read it you'll probably be like ehhhh. /spits. Hahahahahahahahaha. Oops. Hahahaha.

minesomine March 8 2014, 08:29:42 UTC

I think I want pizza.

dilovesyunjae March 8 2014, 02:42:35 UTC

AAaaAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWW......♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

countingcr0ws March 8 2014, 04:48:54 UTC

Haha. /helps to extract your row of bad teeth. Heehee. I'm glad that it made you go all squishy and warm inside, lol, like mission accomplished because I guess I wanted to be all cute and sickly sweet but somehow Yunho got all handsy, predatorish and incredibly horny, but I guess I liked them be all innocent but horny so it stayed and idek what in talking about, hahahaha. Thanks though. Lolll. /offers you your teeth for souvenir.

dilovesyunjae March 8 2014, 07:51:51 UTC

I dont need my teeth back. Just gimme yunho. *makes grabby hand at yunho's butt*

countingcr0ws March 8 2014, 08:03:47 UTC

lol, /makes monster face at you. it's my butt! it's my butt to touch! lol. omg, you know i watched like a video skit thing whatever of like top and gd, and gd went grabbing at top's butt? and i'm like omg, why don't we have that at out fandom too, like okay. /is sad, lol. irrelevant comment is irrelevant, lol.

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ema_tsukimori March 8 2014, 03:32:04 UTC

Sooo cute <3

countingcr0ws March 8 2014, 04:52:04 UTC

Haha, thanks. That was like my motive, I guess, to make people flail and generally axphiate and die from all the happy fumes &c like like during autopsy their insides would be like all replaced with cotton candy and I guess I'm just stretching and coming up with more crap, haha. But yeah, thanks, really. ;D erm I guess I'd say that I'll write more but its easy to not do it even though I want to, so much, so there's not much point in it, so yeah. And erm I'm glad that you enjoyed it, thank you. /gives you invisible virtual sweet as bribe.

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countingcr0ws March 8 2014, 05:01:10 UTC

Haha. I guess I always flail a little like at a loss for words when people thank me for writing, I guess because I really have to thank you guys for commebting because I began writing because of delusion lol and I like to do it, and things like that but yeah. Thank you for thanking me because it makes me uncomfortable like I don't know what to say like that's too formal, and I'm awkward and omg. I should stop saying the wrong things and erm erm. Anyway, yeah! But I was kinda not liking how like you know how when Jaejoong was at the shop and looking at their relationship in retrospection, I guess I really liked his whole rant more, and I'd like it if he said it to Yunho like it'd be great to watch that guy trip and flip and things like that but then yeah. I got too antsy and I just posted it like because I fell asleep during editing/posting and I just couldn't really care and omg it sounds so bad like I don't really care and things like that, but I do, like I edited this so much and stuff like that and omg. I should stop talking but ( ... )

countingcr0ws March 8 2014, 05:03:29 UTC

Wow. I don't even make sense. Yeah. But I meant like Jaejoong kinda went on two rants about Yunho and I liked the first one more than the one he told Yunho and I guess I should have switched it, but I was in too much rush to post it &c yeah. And I guess thank you for thanking me because it makes me feel so official like wow and I'm not used to feeling official. Yeah.