Fic: Windows

[country_who]

stTitle: Windows
Author: country_who
Characters/Parings: Ten2/Rose, Eleven/Rose
Rating: PG
Word Count: 1876
Warnings: Character Death
Summary: “When the Lord closes a door, somewhere he opens a window.”
Author's Note: Made for prompt by mahmfic the doctor_rose_fix Spring Fix-a-thon: "10.5 dies in a tragic accident (say car crash) and Rose uses the new TARDIS that she and 10.5

Comments

[tracy_lousia]

Oh, this made me cry :-( Some perfect bits in it. Not sure if I want it to carry on or just forget it tho. But well written.

[country_who]

*passes tissues* I'm sorry, I'm glad you thought it was well written, though. :)

[tracy_lousia]

Lol, well at least you know you're doing something right if you can move ppl to an emotion. Hope you're well?

[country_who]

I'm okay, been a bit sick, but I'm fine. You?

[silverlunarstar]

*SOB*

I knew this was going to be sad and tragic, but the fact that the Doctor was thinking about the future when it happens makes it all the more painful. :'(

And Rose~! :( :( :( THIS WAS SO SAD AND HURT SO MUCH!

YES DOCTOR YOU ARE THE MASSIVE IDIOT!

Heartbreakingly amazing!

Couple of typos:

Staring at his forehead,

You missed the other 't' in 'starting'

also

"Who are you,"

and

"What happened."

are missing question marks at the end.

[country_who]

Thanks so much for the correction, I genuinely appreciate that. :) *runs to make edits*

Yeah, it was pretty sad to write as well.