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[theupshot]

In the dirty bar,
At midnight, we forgo Pabst.
Coke drifts like new snow.

These so-called haiku are strangely bemusing, probably due to their lack of essence.

Comments

[fghjkauuuuuugh]

...Coke is a drink. How does it drift?

[theupshot]

A logical question, but it's of no use to wonder.

[fghjkauuuuuugh]

Maybe it's a metaphor...what's Pabst?

[theupshot]

You are trying to figure this out?

[screwragnarok]

. . .

[theupshot]

Like I said: lack of essence.

[screwragnarok]

You are acquainted with the art form.

[theupshot]

Marginally.