I need thoughts on a new header . . .

[couplechemistry]

So, I am going to be re-vamping my blog and am trying to come up with some header ideas - this is my current work in progress, but I am not sure what color to do the text! Don't know for sure what the text is going to be, but any comments would be great! Thanks.

Comments

[vampire_sessah]

I'm really looking forward to your revamped journal :D
I really like the header! The scene was so wonderful <3

Concering the text colour: I like the last version best because the greenish colour makes the text stand out more! Also that both lines are written in differen colours is good!

[couplechemistry]

Thanks :) I am looking forward to it too!
I added an updated idea to the original post if you want to check it out.

[vampire_sessah]

I agree wih you on the thing that the text seems too big now :) making it a bit smaller would propably improve the header :) Also I think that helen&John are too dark and I would propably leave them (aka first version of composition) But maybe making the colours a bit brighter so that both "pairings" are a bit more equal?

I hope you understand what I want to say and of course this are only suggestions, so I really really hope I didn't offend you >____

[couplechemistry]

I agree! And I won't be offended - really. I love suggestions!