Just finished the book and it's pretty darn good. ^^ It's fascinating reading the changes since the last draft. I think it's good changes though, for the most part, and things make sense all over. I especially like the fact you've tightened up the horror of their situation somehow -- it got to me in a way the last draft didn't. I miss one or two of my favorite scenes, but at the same time I understand why they got cut and the story is much better without them. It's strange really -- I've read, what, four? five? drafts of this story and you still manage to have me at the edge of my seat. ^^ Oh, and how much do I currently adore you for the end of the book? A lot, let me tell you. This mini!arc of Neil and Coach... It's barely there, but it makes so much sense and I get the impression it means more than Neil probably knows himself
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