Title: Gravity of Love Author: Courtneynus Fandom: Kingdom Hearts Pairing: Riku/Sora Spoilers: All of Kingdom Heart II and Kingdom Hearts I, some of Kingdom Heart Chain of Memories
I like this a lot. It reminds me why I worship this pairing so much. I like how you made a timeline of their relationship: how it grows and changes, but how some things remained the same. But, the wording was awkward; so much so that I had to read a few sentences over to understand the point you were trying to make. I hope you're not offended by what I say; I really do not meant to offend you. :)
I am not offended, English is not my first language but I tired not to make it apparent ^^;; If you would share some of the sentences you had problems with I will rephrases them and make I metal note of it in the future. Ihope you overall enjoyed it but yes I am more graphically talented, icons etc. Thank you again!
I already posted 2 reeeeally long comments on the ship manifesto page! ^^;; (So you've got that to look forward to :P)
I love what you wrote, and you did really well despite English not being ur 1st language (as Eng. is my ONLY language, im especially impressed!) RikuxSora 4ever!!! Just wanted to say that XD
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I love what you wrote, and you did really well despite English not being ur 1st language (as Eng. is my ONLY language, im especially impressed!)
RikuxSora 4ever!!!
Just wanted to say that XD
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Keep up the good work!
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