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[courtneynus]

Title: "Bar Fight" 1/1
Word Count: 5988
Pairing : Bam/Ryan and Ryan/OC(female)
Rating: Hard R for language and extreme Cliché.
Summary: Cliché classic genderbending of Ryan Dunn, which could just be said of me just wanting to decribe her killer rack.

Comments

[apostrophee]

Horrible writing my ass, girl this was great! It was like a frenzied fairytale on bad acid trip -I mean that in the best way possible. I was a bit confused at times though mostly because I was so intrigued I think my mind may have been skipping sentences to get on to the next part, but there's no denying that you have yourself a great talent and this story....well I'm not sure if I'm thinking it's great because it's so different from anything else I've ever read (or written LOL)in this fandom (hell..in any fandom!)or if it was your fluid writing or if I'm still not sure if Ryan was in fact a girl or if perhaps he was having a drunken hallucination of an alter ego and yeah, I'm kinda confused and I do in deed feel like I've just took a hit of crack.

You know what. I'm going to reread this after I haven't been up all night long and then I'll give you a proper review that makes at least a little bit of sense...but yeah, I think six hours from now I'm still going to be patting you on the back and screaming 'well done'.

[courtneynus]

I am so smitten right now, thank you! Oh, he is a she, I wanted to do some other ones, if people take it so graciously as you, of real events in Dunn's life. Most of all I wanted to do Novak's drug addiction in her point-of-view and that heartbreaking part in time where Bam and Ryan fell out, may be even the gumball, or may be just fandom such as love child between the two. Thank you again, your review gave me that tingling feeling!

[apostrophee]

Honestly, I wouldn't expect too many people to even attempt to give this a read simply because it's so outside of the box, but the minute I started reading I felt like I was pulled into some offbeat fairytale full of metaphors and grandiose speech that it kept my attention -even if I kept getting confused to if Ryan Dunn was in fact a girl or whether Bam was thinking of him as one to disassociate himself with being gay or if everyone was drunk and just hallucinating and -yeah, I could go on forever. Just don't get discouraged much if not too many people don't read, alot of people prefer to 'stay' where they're comfortable at (and to each his own) and not click past the cut, but I definitely think this was very interesting and SUCH a good read that I can't help but to adore it -and its lovely strangeness.

[courtneynus]

Oh, I know that many won't read it just on its word length. I should had post it in at least two different chapters or so, or tell me to take in sections then come back and read the rest. Glad you love, thank you again.

[trollsttroll]

Just wow.

Your descriptions about the setting and of the inner dialogue are amazing!

I think this fic is in a class all by itself... even the cliche of genderbending doesn't seem like one... it's that good!

[courtneynus]

Oh, thank you! You make me feel so fuzzy! If all reviewers are so generous as you I think I would want to make at least 3 more Female Dunn Fics! Thank you again!

[legoxpirate]

Okay, so I was skulking around the slashass comm. and I stumbled across this. And wow. Your storyline for this is absolutely fabulous. I know this is probably redundant and a bit out of the blue, but I was wondering if Ryan was actually a female, or transgendered, or just drag-y. I actually liked not knowing as I read it as it created some mystery and suspense. But I just had to ask.