THE POWER OF SUGGESTION by Nataliya

[cousinnat]

Here's my first Muncle challenge story, for theme 41 (photo of Illya in chair). Please don't take it too seriously. :)

Comments

[shayheyred]

Utterly delightful. Your Illya made me laugh out loud. You will stop being a ham, indeed.

[cousinnat]

Thanks, Shay! And thanks to Sith for throwing a life preserver to my drowning story and posting it correctly. I now know what the "challenge" part means.

And thanks to Di, I've edited the story in my own LJ so that it doesn't take up so much space on the "friends" page.

It didn't occur to me that this plot was a nod to Shakespeare. Must have been subliminal. :)

Nat

[scifiroots]

How delightful! *vbg* Absolutely loved it, my dear! I laughed aloud *g* Cute little story that brightened my day! Thanks!

[cousinnat]

Nice to meet you, scifiroots. Thanks for the kind words.

[dryadwoman]

Before I read the story, I have to say how much I LUST your icon.

[dryadwoman]

Very enjoyable! I love how in Illya's head you are.

[cousinnat]

Isn't that just a beautiful back, tho? I'm glad you like it because I don't pay membership fees and it's my default icon. You'll be seeing it a lot!

Back at Ya

[tgabrielle]

When I saw your icon some time ago I assumed it was a photo manip. I now know (from careful examination of "Sol Madrid") that it is not. Clothes don't make a man, do they?

[frau_flora]

Oh, this was wonderful!

Odd how selective the memory is. I loved that last line.

Now I´m sitting here with a stupid and delighted grin on my face. And as it´s past midnight over here I´ll take this grin to bed and have very happy dreams. Thank you so much!

And thanks to dinahmt for the link!

[cousinnat]

I don't pay Dinah for nothing! Glad you liked it, FF.

[gilda_elise]

Wonderful story; Cute, yet lovely at the same time. And I loved the last line!

[cousinnat]

Thank you, Gilda. Getting all this feedback is SWEET.

Last raps

[tgabrielle]

I loved the last line, too, about selective memory. It was delightful that Illya's memory was not really impaired--he explained to Napoleon exactly what happened to him--no worries or apologies. Not his fault. At the same time I was so worried when Mark Slate showed up before Napoleon. Perish the thought! God forbid Illya would have seen him first. I assume if that happened his memory would have been selective as well, as in not hypnotized.

[cousinnat]

I'm so glad you were worried about Mark because I wanted him to give the reader pause. Perish the thought is right! I wouldn't do that to you. :)

I appreciate the feedback from one of the best writers in MFU fandom.