i sing the body electric

Mar 29, 2014 17:19

i sing the body electric

lu han/sehun
nc-17
warnings: first person narration, body worship, bdsm elements, daddy kink, mentions of heavy impact play and asphyxiation

we give bruises out like gifts. )

exo, sehun/luhan

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illusiontooreal March 30 2014, 00:34:11 UTC
Wowowwowowowoowowow this is amazing. It's so powerfully written especially because it's in first person. The power play is really shown and you're right. There are hardly any fics written in the dom's POV.
Lol. What is eloquence. Soz for the shit comment ♡

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keuriwoseo March 31 2014, 01:56:09 UTC
ah thank you so much!! ;;

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xahhreee March 30 2014, 03:53:36 UTC
breathless

<3

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keuriwoseo March 31 2014, 01:56:25 UTC
;o; thank you!

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xahhreee April 3 2014, 03:09:50 UTC
just...the best type of inspiration. and so hot *____*

gifted writers like you make me feel so envious tbh~ i wish my writing was as powerful as yours!

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blobsofgrey April 9 2014, 14:31:55 UTC
pls it's perf and beautiful <333 you did awesome writing it in first person (人´∀`*)

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