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Let The Revolution Take Its Toll: parts 16-20

Apr 21, 2011 21:37

Lookie! More vignettes. For anyone interested, I have taken to calling this universe of stories Let The Revolution Take Its Toll. Mainly because I needed something to call the files on my computer...

Moments of Truth
Prompt: Alone
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 256
Characters/Pairing: Anders, Justice
Summary: ( “Human identity is the most fragile thing that we have, and it's often only found in moments of truth.” - Alan Rudolph )

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Comments 12

arysani April 22 2011, 17:08:34 UTC

You have a gift for closing lines on your drabbles, I have to say. Torn between favorites: It is something else entirely who picks up his staff and walks away. and It is mercy.

Goes straight for the jugular, emotionally...as I've learned to expect. Thanks for sharing.

cowards_kiss April 23 2011, 01:19:09 UTC

Thank you! I actually think that writing the last lines is my favorite part of all of these. The rest is fun, yeah, but that's my favorite. Apparently it shows. XD

featheredraven April 22 2011, 18:04:16 UTC

Oh, all of these are fantastic. That last line, It is mercy is very, very moving - that whole last piece is, actually. I love different looks at to why Hawke might or might not kill Anders.

Also, I really like the Anders and Tabris ones (but then, I have a huge soft spot for Tabris fic), particularly the second one, and how he acknowledges that what Zevran and Tabris have is actually love and he won't interfere.

cowards_kiss April 23 2011, 01:21:27 UTC

Thank you!

The moment I read that prompt (mercy) I was like, "yes. I know exactly what I need to do with this. I'm so glad it worked.

And I love Tabris in all his/her incarnations, I really do. I keep trying to find ways to work her into these for just that reason. It's my one issue with the topic I chose - I'm really limited in the Tabris-stories I get to write.

solan_t April 22 2011, 19:00:53 UTC

Oh! And to think I almost didn't read these; I would have been poorer for it. Thank you for sharing!

cowards_kiss April 23 2011, 01:21:45 UTC

I'm so glad you did! And that you enjoyed them.

katznhund April 22 2011, 19:17:17 UTC

Wow, that last one. Very moving.

cowards_kiss April 23 2011, 01:22:27 UTC

Thank you! It's probably my favorite of this bunch, really.

ballades April 22 2011, 21:04:41 UTC

Ah, I love these. The poker face one especially. Oh, Anders.

cowards_kiss April 23 2011, 01:22:52 UTC

Thank you! Glad you enjoyed.