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[coyotecolored]

I need a proper ending for the revised wing!fic so badly and I just... can't. I got nothing. D:

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[hyperballad]

They have SEX and then Heechul comes in and gives them a SPACE PONY and they ride off into the MOONSET.

[coyotecolored]

8D would a sex snippet be too weird? some time in the future, a meet-the-parents? a happy little KRZY chat? a random snippet of Kyuhyun realizing he's stopped seeing the wings and just sees Mimi?

[hyperballad]

I like the part about not seeing wings and only seeing Mimi. I think meeting the parents opens up a whole new section and if you want to write it, go for it, but if you're looking to end sometime soon, it should probably be saved for part 2 or something.

[thundersquall]

I wish I could help, but since idk how and where you're stuck and where you want to go with this (I'm sure you have a direction in mind, at least), all I can offer is moral support. =D And oh, I really, really enjoyed the fic, seriously. I know people were saying things like the pacing was off and ending was abrupt, but I admit, I'm bad at concrit and if I like something I tend to skim over the flaws, so I won't go there. But I'm sure you can come up with something stunning, like you always do. =D ♥

[hyperballad]

Is lj being a bitch about emailing comments to you?