SPN Fic: A Peacefulness Follows

[coyotesuspect]

First round, Ava only kills one person, a firestarter from California named Chris. He kills Todd and Melissa, though, so in terms of body count, he’s the winner.

But neither of them kill Jeremy.

Ava’s not really sure what kills Jeremy. She thinks it’s a demon. It looks like a little girl until it doesn’t, and it advances on her after it finishes

Comments

[familiardevil]

Ava deserved to be queen. SHE was the best of those sons of bitches.

Great writing, as usual ;)

[coyotesuspect]

Yeah, it never seemed fair to me that Ava's there for five freaking months killing sons of bitched, and then YED's all, "LOL, Sammy and Jake only have to survive one round."

So Ava had a bad day. But in terms of sheer ass-kicking, YED would've been smart to go with her.

And thanks. :D

[familiardevil]

I thought Jake was alright for the job, but when you get down to it, ~*~IT WAS ALWAYS SAMMICH

[coyotesuspect]

But he really only managed to get things done by being a bumbling doofus. (I'm sorry Sammy; I love you, but it's true.)

If they'd just used Ava, there would have been no need for the whole Ruby subterfuge. It just would have been, "Oh, so we need you to help Lilith break some seals. And when you're done, you gotta kill Lilith so Lucifer will rise. And then you get your eternal reward."

And Ava would have done it. With style and flair.

[coyotesuspect]

I knew I wanted to use "A Peacefulness Follows" as the title, but I realized I didn't know where it was from. So I googled it and that quote popped.

Huh, I thought. That's weirdly apt.

Anyway, glad you liked! :D Thanks for reading.

[coyotesuspect]

She was a great character. I'm not sure I'm up for a shippy fic about her, but I write more gen. :)

Thanks for reading! I'm really glad you liked.

[coyotesuspect]

:O Very cool. Should I crosspost?

[andreth47]

I LOVED this! Ava was one of my favorite characters, and you've imagined the horror and dark thrill of what happened to her so well. Nice work!

Yellow Eyes taps her on the nose.

Loved that. So in character and creepy.

[coyotesuspect]

I had a lot of fun writing YED, to be quite honest. >>

And thank you so much!

you've imagined the horror and dark thrill of what happened to her so well.
It really must have horrible, huh? You can almost forgive her for going all batshit and killing Andy.

[andreth47]

Oh Andy! I loved him too. *sob*

You made Ava's "slippery slope" very understandable and sympathetic here, I thought. Very nicely done!

[coyotesuspect]

*comforts*

I miss him and his awesome van too. ):

And thank you again! spn_30snapshots asks that you keep the snapshots within 1000 words, so I had a tricky time trying to fit Ava's transformation in that short a space. So I'm ecstatic to hear that it came across as realistic. :D

[kayto1]

Oh wow - such a nice view into her head....I kinda hated/loved that Ava went evil - and I love this view of how.

[coyotesuspect]

:D So glad you enjoyed and that Ava's transformation worked for you. <3