Comments | coyotesuspect: Fic: Babylon, SPN, Sam/Dean

coyotesuspect

Fic: Babylon, SPN, Sam/Dean

Dec 26, 2013 00:23

Title: Babylon
Fandom: Supernatural
Pairing: Sam/Dean
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Dean kind of develops a thing for Sam's abs. And then there's a curse. Set late season 1, post Hell House. Allusions to past wincest (though no underage).
Notes: Written for oddishly for the 2013 spn_j2_xmas exchange. I hope you enjoy!
Word Count: ~5200

( Black dogs. Fun. )

fic, spn fic

Comments 56

callistosh65 December 27 2013, 08:39:48 UTC

Wonderful! Nothing like the pace and zing between them in the early seasons. You caught it all beautifully.

coyotesuspect January 3 2014, 20:29:53 UTC

:D Thank you so much! Early seasons are my favorite, so I'm very pleased you think I captured the dynamic.

cackling_madly December 28 2013, 08:02:21 UTC

This was awesome. It gave me S1 nostalgia. Loved it <333

coyotesuspect January 3 2014, 20:30:10 UTC

Thank you! ^_____^

amberdreams December 28 2013, 09:58:12 UTC

This made me smile. I liked how you kept it in Dean's POV so we could really feel all his uncertainty.

coyotesuspect January 3 2014, 20:31:19 UTC

Glad you enjoyed! Thank you for commenting!

gold_bluepoint December 29 2013, 09:19:21 UTC

EEEEEEEE YOU CAN PROBABLY GUESS HOW I FELT ABOUT THIS, which is 'delighted'. Ahhh that was really nice and you still have a great grasp of their physical mannerisms and habits with each other. (DEAN HAS STANDARDS. I really liked the way it ended!) This also made me feel at at least one point like going into my own drafts document and writing early seasons fic, which is awesome, thank you.

Dean looking and trying not to look! Sam being flushed and irritated by turns! Their wandering path through America and from hunt to hunt! Their character voices, which were EXCELLENT! Being a good team, even unable to communicate (both literally and metaphorically)! all those good things, you had them all! :DD

coyotesuspect January 3 2014, 20:33:24 UTC

YES GO THROUGH YOUR DRAFTS AND WRITE EARLY SEASONS FIC DO IT SO I MAY REVEL IN IT EEEEEE

I'm so glad you like this bb :DDD And yes! All of those elements! So fun to write! So glad they clicked for you! I love WInchesters: Wandering Across America and Having Communication Problems, the Show! And I'm really pleased you think I got their mannerisms and habits down ^____^ All those hours spent obsessively rewatching early seasons have done some good.

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oddishly December 31 2013, 21:20:34 UTC

Eeeeeee, this is awesome, thank you so much!! I love how taken up with looking after Sam Dean is throughout, and Sam's absolute disbelief at how clueless Dean is behaving. The curse is a delightful way to show how well they communicate in all ways that aren't even out loud -- I love that Dean feels proud of them for communicating and working so well together <3 -- and I am 9208649036% OVERJOYED at Sam's offended ostrich impression :DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD And of course someone's covered in swamp goo when it happens again :DDDDDD

Thank you so much for writing me such a great fic!! I am smiling and smiling :))))

coyotesuspect January 3 2014, 20:59:30 UTC

:DDDDD I am so glad you enjoyed! I took a lot of inspiration from your emphasis on characters trusting each other in your prompt (which somehow became about communication, idk). But thank you so much for the lovely comment! This was fun to write and I am very proud of Sam's offended ostrich impression. Hope you had a great holiday. <3