SPN Fic: Sinew, Marrow, Bone

Feb 23, 2010 23:47

Title: Sinew, Marrow, Bone
Fandom: Supernatural
Rating: PG 13
Summary: The ghost is gone by midnight, sent up in fire and smoke. The demons take a little longer.  Mid season 4.
Characters/Pairings: Sam, Dean, Ruby, minor Castiel. Gen with acknowledgment of Sam/Ruby
Word Count: ~5800
Spoilers/Warnings: Spoilers through season 4; violence, language
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familiardevil February 24 2010, 05:50:24 UTC
HAAAAAAAAAAY!

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coyotesuspect February 24 2010, 05:51:24 UTC
HOLLA!

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familiardevil February 24 2010, 05:52:59 UTC
'YE APPROVES!
NEEDED MORE TAYLOR SWIFT THOUGH
SHE COULDN'T HAVE MADE A CAMEO ON THE RADIO?
This makes me feel like I need a TSwift icon though.
Amanda will do for now.

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coyotesuspect February 24 2010, 05:55:49 UTC
One of us needs a TSwift icon at least.

And one of us only has 35 icon slots.

I think we both know which one of should be the one honoring the Goddess.

*stares at*

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familiardevil February 24 2010, 05:52:17 UTC
I was just like 'you wrote this for me?' before I realized how this came about again.
LOLing.
You know I do like Sam in this though. Especially when you had him all angsty and fucking MS Paint in AIM because of Dean's stupid stupidness.

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coyotesuspect February 24 2010, 05:54:54 UTC
I wrote it because of you. Not for you.

God.

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familiardevil February 24 2010, 06:00:41 UTC
I know bitch I was watching I corrected myself.

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cantarina1 February 24 2010, 13:54:05 UTC
I like the new ending much better! And the first scene between Sam and Dean, until the messenger arrives, still kills me. Oh boys :(

Small spacing problem here:
He thinks it though, all of it swirling inside his head, clenching in his gut. It would be just like to Dean to die right next to him and to do it quietly, ruin all of Sam’s hard work so far. He’s trying to save the world, yeah, but part of saving the world is saving Dean.
Sam’s half convinced himself Dean was immortal. Every time he’s lost or almost lost Dean, something’s brought him back, but Sam’s tired of forever waiting for someone to bring his brother back to him. His solution is simple, logical. He kills Lilith, he saves the world, and Dean dies at age of eighty-four, in a hospital bed after a wife, two kids, and one too many hamburgers.

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coyotesuspect February 24 2010, 19:24:54 UTC
Thanks! And fixed.

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borgmama1of5 February 24 2010, 20:00:26 UTC
Riveting and devastating, and I think you show Sam's feelings about Dean and about the demon blood exactly right.

Just wow!

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coyotesuspect February 26 2010, 08:08:16 UTC
:) Thank you so much!

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blubird_pie February 24 2010, 22:43:20 UTC
Shiney! I love Sam's observation about Dean being willing to die for just about anyone, and the line "He's spent his entire life letting his brother drive him off cliffs." Actually, I liked quite a few lines, enough that it would be pointless to quote them all back at you. So instead, I'll just say that this was a lovely mix of action and introspection and I had a great time reading it, even though Sam and Dean being so distant is rather depressing.

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coyotesuspect February 26 2010, 08:09:37 UTC
even though Sam and Dean being so distant is rather depressing
It really is. I'm glad that season 5 has shown the boys getting closer together again.

Thanks for reading!

(And Anna icon- eek! :D)

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