SPN RPF Fic: A City in the Desert

[coyotesuspect]

FML FML FML I have three hours of sleep and I have to spend all day volunteering at an art festival. I am going to die. I am not even sure I liked this. I have finals. I hate myself. I hate everything. I'm pretty sure I even ripped myself off writing this. Someone kill me.

I'll just leave this here then.

Title: A City in the Desert
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Comments

[cantarina1]

So first of all, this Genevieve is fierce. And far as I can tell, fairly honest and open, but so obviously gutsy at just... damn, I love it. Can we have the women written like this more often, please? Also, your opening line is fantastic. And I'm sort of delighted to see Aldis pop up.

irises eaten to black.
Hmm, I really like this phrasing.

Oh Jensen, why did you flee? *facepalms*

He can only be so many things to Jared; at some point, he's going to fuck up in one of his jobs (manager, best friend, whatever that was), and then everything will fall apart.
Okay, now you've just splintered my heart a little, because this feels so honest and I love how self-aware and yet totally panicked Jensen is being.

They’d hit it off after Jensen successfully managed to duck the bottle of Jack Daniels one of Chris’ bandmates had flung at his head, and been good friends since.
I love wierd friendship stories like these.

Also, Chris' straightfoward advice <3

Jensen sits down next to Jared. There are days when he thinks Jared could fly if he wanted

[coyotesuspect]

Genevieve was a treat to write. She's so underdeveloped in fic, that I loved having the chance to play around with her. Also, this is not the RPF femmeslash I mentioned to you earlier (in case you were wondering), this is kind of a trial run for a fic in which Danneel and Genevieve will be the main pairing. ;D!

“And fucking me on the kitchen counter?”
“Well that was an act of desperation,” admits Jared.
That's one of my favorite exchanges in the entire fic. BANTER IS SO MUCH FUN TO WRITE.

Thank you so much for your feedback. I really appreciate you picking out all the pieces you really liked. ♥ ♥ ♥

[cantarina1]

I'm a bit terrible at banter (you may have noticed XD), which is probably why I love reading it so much.

I'd kind of hoped this wasn't the femmeslash piece you'd meant, so YAY \o/

♥♥♥♥♥♥♥ I love reading your stories, so I'm glad I can give at least a little something back!

[jsluv]

This was really good and well written...great job really. I Loved It :)

[coyotesuspect]

Thank you!

[strangeallure]

“It was fucking Ferngully with extra bestiality.”

This.

Also: I haven't seen Entourage, but I thought this was great. ♥

[coyotesuspect]

I am just glad I did not actually have to pay for my ticket. -_-

Entourage is a pretty good show! It definitely has some problems, but I enjoy it. Thanks for reading. :D

[anne_higgins]

Oh, I loved this! Funny, little bit angsty, and I could have read Jen battling with Dani for hours! Bravo!

[coyotesuspect]

Jensen and Danneel snarking at each other was a lot of fun to write, so I'm happy to hear it was fun to read. Glad you loved and thanks for reading. :D

[pretty_hostel]

Yay girl you wrote porn! ...Now I'm going to read.