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crabby_lioness

Post-Mortem Part 3

Mar 08, 2007 15:08

People had trouble downloading Part 3, so I split it. My apologies.

Fic: Post-Mortem Part 3 (4/6 including an Interlude and an Epilogue)
Author: CrabbyLioness
Pairings: Team, Jack/Ianto mentioned, Tosh/Jack/Ianto mentioned
Summary: In the wake of Jack's disappearance, Owen tries to figure out what to do next.
Rating: R for language and sexual ( Read more... )

fic, post-mortem

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crabby_lioness February 13 2007, 03:03:04 UTC

Thanks.

crabby_lioness March 30 2007, 12:40:22 UTC

*poke, poke* I've finished it. Come back and tell me what you think of the rest of Owen's story.

canterbury359 February 12 2007, 22:55:35 UTC

"Christ. We really are crap at this, aren't we?"

Ianto grunted in agreement. "I won't tell if you won't."

LOL - The Brigader (OG) writing some lines of this? :) Only joking! Moment of self-knowledge there - first step to getting better. If Owen ever sort out his issues with Ianto - watch out world! Their scrapping is taking up their time, not to mention Gwen and Tosh having to waste time policing them.

Do you want proofing comments? If so - in section about why they haven't caught the Doc in 130 years - BecauseTorchwood needs splitting.

Looking forward to more...

crabby_lioness February 13 2007, 04:26:31 UTC

LOL - The Brigader (OG) writing some lines of this? :)

LOL I'll have to tell him that.

If Owen ever sort out his issues with Ianto - watch out world! Their scrapping is taking up their time, not to mention Gwen and Tosh having to waste time policing them.

Those boys need a hobby.

Do you want proofing comments? If so - in section about why they haven't caught the Doc in 130 years - BecauseTorchwood needs splitting.

Thanks. That's why I'm writing this in an open file.

Looking forward to more...

Coming up! :)

msp_hacker February 12 2007, 23:32:58 UTC

Last chapter, I was wondering why they didn't find any photo albulms of Jack. Looks like Gwen thought it odd too! Though what happened to the one that Jack was looking at in "Small Worlds?"

And, spelling convention: "He had to land that bloody thing in Torchwood 1's attic in order to find out about us at all." 1 should be spelled out.

crabby_lioness February 13 2007, 04:27:23 UTC

Thank you. The album will show up before the end of the story. ;)

canterbury359 February 13 2007, 20:05:28 UTC

Was going to wait a while but...

"It's a good plan. It's a pity it won't work."
"What?"
"Any plan that relies on Owen keeping a secret is doomed."

ROFL - comedy gold :D And so true :D

Proofing - para starting "We don't know if he's human or not."
Missing n in "doesn't"; missing t in "stating".

Maybe I should leave this page alone for, like, a day and give you some space to work on this :)

crabby_lioness February 14 2007, 15:42:39 UTC

I hope to work on it today, but I just lost a lens of my glasses. Panic attack!

lunamazes February 13 2007, 23:09:04 UTC

I like the way that Owen describe Ianto, it's always the quiet one you have to careful.

crabby_lioness February 14 2007, 02:33:54 UTC

Some men just can't understand each other. Mutt and Jeff, Spock and McCoy, Owen and Ianto.