Comments | craknlaknfool: things end sometimes

craknlaknfool

things end sometimes

Feb 08, 2005 21:29

You have so many relationships in this life,
But only one or two will last.
You go through all the pain and strife,
Then you turn your back and they’re gone so fast.

Comments 8

4fetch_rules February 9 2005, 05:35:27 UTC

me gust el poem

4fetch_rules February 9 2005, 05:40:11 UTC

yeah okay now i realize or was told same thang
that this is not a poem by ali it is a poem by the hansen brothers

love
mizz thang.

_oladam_ February 9 2005, 06:18:40 UTC

That's alright for the most part, but that poem is just too bland. The rhyming is cute, but that poem expresses/tells very little to the reader.

I'd say that's more like a short story that rhymes, Mabye it is. Who knows?

nickynoodles February 9 2005, 06:26:20 UTC

hmmm..it does tell "little to the reader".

Ali? We all need to talk.

craknlaknfool February 12 2005, 20:52:32 UTC

ya i know everything is fucked up
i love you though

pinkbutton558 February 9 2005, 06:35:21 UTC

Hey, I was on the phone with you when you made that shizzz..call me later. bye.
- Callie

HAN SON SONG 4fetch_rules February 10 2005, 03:09:41 UTC

i thoght she told me it was a hanson song.. ugh/.

almost_famous1 February 13 2005, 05:18:22 UTC

i love u ali... we should talk OUTSIDE OF ENGLISH CLASS WHEN UR BORED lol. see u lata
xoxo
chelsea
p.s where were u didnt go to the dance u anti-social poop...lol