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Quitting (A Lily-Verse Tale) (1/1)

May 02, 2011 12:56

Title: Qutting
Author: cranberry_pi
Rating: NC-17 for sex
Spoilers: Nope!
Summary: Set between Out Tonight and Cravings. Rachel devises a unique stop-smoking program for Quinn.
WARNINGS: Contains DP, Anal, and a teensy bit of breathplay.

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fic, faberry

Comments 12

bladeddarkness May 2 2011, 21:25:49 UTC

This was awesome (and an interesting way to convince someone to quit smoking!). Rachel's determination turning into Quinn's determination was a very nice touch.

cranberry_pi May 3 2011, 13:23:26 UTC

Thank you! :D One of the first Lily-Verse ideas I had was Quinn trying to stop smoking, and it took a while to write, so I'm glad it was a good read! :)

jacs1010 May 3 2011, 01:13:32 UTC

That was amazingly hot yet still so sweet at the same time.

I am really loving your Lily-verse tales :)

& what does a girl have to do to convince you to write a full description of that last reward?

cranberry_pi May 3 2011, 13:24:17 UTC

Thank you so much! :)

Hmm - I hadn't actually given any thought to writing that...I'll see what I can do, though! :)

mjacton May 3 2011, 21:37:17 UTC

I was all set to tell you how hot this was (it is!) and how funny it felt that it was part of "Lily-verse" (it does!). Then, the sweetness hit, the marriage proposal (very sweet!). Then, suddenly, Brittany and Santana brought the heat back!

I don't really know how you do it, but you're kind of brilliant.

cranberry_pi May 6 2011, 13:12:33 UTC

*blushes* Thank you! It was a different sort of tale for the Lily-Verse, but I'm glad you liked it! :)

baconrex May 4 2011, 00:09:41 UTC

Hehehe! Hot.

cranberry_pi May 6 2011, 13:12:50 UTC

Thank you! :D

nyx29 May 4 2011, 21:33:40 UTC

Why didn't my girlfriend do this when I was trying to quit smoking?? That would have made it so much easier.

Really, incredibly hot. And funny. And sweet. And I know I already said hot but it needed to be said again.

I think my imagination could come up with some pretty cool ideas about what happened in their bedroom with Brittany and Santana but I think your imagination would do it so much better. (You know I'm not very good at subtle so I'm not even trying)!

x

cranberry_pi May 6 2011, 13:15:26 UTC

I know! I could have stopped a lot easier if there'd been someone to do this! :)

Well, I don't mind hearing hot twice! :D

Lol - I'll take the not-subtle hint and see what I can do! :) Thanks so much! :)