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[cranehaven]

geese at sunset,
pass silently overhead
between sun and clouds-
traced on the darkening ground
departing shadows . . . . .

Comments

I like it!

[andreochka]

Paul, I'm not very fond of tanka, you know...
but I just want to say that this poem is truly
gorgeous... very visual! Thanks for sharing! :)

Re: I like it!

[cranehaven]

Hi Andrea,

Its good to hear from you, knowing that you ar enot so interested in this form only increases my pleasure and gratitude with your kind comment

Warm wishes

~P