Walls

Apr 30, 2009 11:11



"You're too serious," he said as he sat across from me "You should just be more casual sometimes." He was one of those guys who can't keep his feelings to himself. Sort of has a higher voice too, but not bad higher. More like honey-smooth higher. Anyway how can I be less serious when the walls won't stop dripping? It wouldn't be so bad if they ( Read more... )

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taimaifackinshu May 1 2009, 00:08:39 UTC
I like it. what did they take?

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craze_176 May 1 2009, 00:57:16 UTC
it was just a spontaneous short story I wrote at lunch. I get bored :P There was a vague idea that the person was in a mental institution but since it's first person and I was trying to stay in character, he/she doesn't really fully know that. The first person was a hallucination and the second person was the doctor. Staying in the brain of a mental patient in a quick story was tough :P

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