Lj-Idol Topic - Week 6 step on a crack

[crazed_delusion]

Fingers press hard against fractured skin.
Memories of past scars lay under new ones.
Breaking under impossible expectation.
Forever trapped in a spiral of pain and destruction.

Comments

[basric]

Sad and chilling

[eternal_ot]

Aww..:/ hoped it ended positively...a few more stanzas maybe..

[eska818]

So short, but so powerful and beautiful.

Breaking under impossible expectation. I love the desperation of this line.

[jem0000000]

*hugs*

[itsjustc]

So sad :(