Comments | crazy_magpie: #31 -- Sunrise

crazy_magpie

#31 -- Sunrise

Oct 23, 2006 10:15

Disclaimer: I own neither Without A Trace, nor the characters in it. They belong to Warner Brothers Television. I make no money from these works, they are for entertainment purposes only.
Title: "Sunrise"
Fandom: Without A Trace
Character: Martin Fitzgerald
Prompt: #31 Sunrise
Word Count: 1800 (approx)
Rating: PG
Spoilers: None
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Comments 10

futma October 23 2006, 12:49:01 UTC

*grins* Even teenage Martin couldn't keep his fingers from artery blockers. :D

Love the point of view from Victor. Considering that he apparently never learned to show love, he's doing not too bad...which is a crap argument for every child not feeling loved.

But at least I got to be first! :D (let's ignore the fact that Jenn's already online for some time and probably already read this) First!

crazy_magpie October 23 2006, 22:22:36 UTC

Even teenage Martin couldn't keep his fingers from artery blockers

Say Wha? I'm confused.

I'm glad you liked it, though.

futma October 24 2006, 12:29:38 UTC

Sorry, mindless translating of phrase of words there.
You know, Hamburgers with all their fat block arteries. Tataa, Artery blockers! :)

goodisrelative October 24 2006, 17:24:55 UTC

HA! Late again! I enlightened her lastnight chatting on Gmail... but of course there was no way for you to know that!

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futma October 23 2006, 12:50:54 UTC

And in all my euphoria at being first I never really told you that this is one helluva fic. You never fail. :)

goodisrelative October 23 2006, 14:19:39 UTC

Finally, she commented, so I can now comment! Christ... I was sure I'd forget to come back waiting for someone to comment.
And sadly, she doesn't realize that I was here first, I just thought I'd be nice and wait for her to comment first since I already read the story.

Excellent as always. I love this insight into them both... shows us how alike they are and how blind they are to each other... as I have told you previously.

How is the next C story coming? Unblocked yet?

goodisrelative October 23 2006, 14:20:56 UTC

Opps... forgot to finish reading her comment... She does realize who was here first. :)

futma October 24 2006, 12:27:59 UTC

Yep, she noticed. She is also master of an art called suppression.

goodisrelative October 24 2006, 17:23:31 UTC

I JUST got this comment emailed to me.
STUPID LJ.

:)