#24 -- Family

[crazy_magpie]

Disclaimer: I do not own the Without A Trace characters. This story is for entertainment purposes only. I recognise no financial returns from these works, whatsoever.
Title: "Patterns"
Fandom: Without A Trace
Character: Martin Fitzgerald
Prompt: #24 - Family
Word Count: 7,200 (approx)
Rating: PG
Spoilers: Season 4
Credits: Thank you kate98 and jennukes for

Comments

[goodisrelative]

This story rocks for all the 14 comments in the beta version. Some of the descriptions (loan shark interest and such) ROCK. Your portrayl of Jessica and Emma are wonderful and the rebellion is perfect, because forced to be the same, it *will* happen....
YOU ROCK. I still say A. Smythe needs her own story.. with Jessica in it... Not yet sure if Jessica should share her with Emma.

[futma]

Well, as I am only number two here I can just repeat what Jenn said.

a) You rock!
b) A. Smythe needs an own story.
c) ... okay, this she didn't say in her comment, but ... A. Smythe correcting Jessica's grammar to Emma and I? It's like our conversations are in hindsight all about the stories!
d) You rock! I think I love Emma and Jessica even better than Lisa.

[crazy_magpie]

:D What? You think I haven't been picking your brain for ideas? Mwhahahahahha!!!

I think Emma and Jessica can get him into more trouble... :)

[futma]

It more felt like you and Jenn discussing the fic right in front of my eyes, but me of course not getting it until after having read the fic.

Can I sue you?

[crazy_magpie]

No. Because then I would have to stop writing, and my lawyer would have to take... measures.

Plus, I have no money.

[ivorychopsticks]

I like this peak at the twins again. And you are posting so many stories lately; it's awesome! And I like the echoes of the urge to run away, and the detailed planner personality from Martin to Jessica. Nice.

[crazy_magpie]

Thank you. Jessica just sort of grew into character that way. When I originally plotted her, she was supposed to be like her mother (which would exasperate Martin), but she became more his shadow... which is, in some ways, kind of sad. At the same time, it gives me a lot more to work with. :)

[dreamy_orion]

I'm glad you're posting so many new stories. The way they all tie into each other amazes me, we really get to know the whole 'Martin world'. I've got to agree with the others: you ROCK :-)

[crazy_magpie]

Thank you.

Every story just seems to inspire another until I can't stop. Oh well, I've got 64 stories left to go, so I've got plenty of room. *g*