Hush Little Baby 7

[crazyamoeba]

Zack woke up with an aching back and a stiff neck, groaning as he wondered why the hell he was experiencing such pain. What had he done last night?

He slowly opened his eyes and let out another groan as realisation slowly dawned. He was scrunched up on the sofa, and had his arm stretched out, as if there had, at one point, been someone sitting

Comments

[ldyavalon]

This hurts so much I can taste it... You are doing an incredible job of describing emotions and events, I'm anxiously waiting for more :)

[zilldk]

AMAZING! The only word that comes to mind to do it justice! This is truly heartwrenching and SO well written - It crawls under your skin. Can't wait for the next chapter!

[delphae80]

Very good. Very, very good story. I can't wait for the next chapter, I realy want to know who is hurting Cloud. Then help Zack take him apart.

[ffvii_4_ever]

Please up date soon!!! It's getting really good!

[gryffin_draco]

Poor Cloud! I can't wait for more of this. And the anticipation of the revelation as to his rapist...I may have a suspect in mind...