Great chapter! Brian coming for the rescue *sigh* But somehow Justin´s last sentence seems off to me...is he on drugs?? Not the reaction I would have expected. I don´t know, relieved perhaps, afraid....but wide, adoring eyes....hhmmm.... Keep posting, I really like the story =)
Thanks for the support! I'm glad you like the chapter and Brian's heroics! Justin's last comment is a strange subject, even to me, because at the time this sentence just hit me, and I knew that I had to write it down, knowing that it was somehow right for the story, even though it is a strange thing for Justin to say. And at the time, I had no idea why Justin said that but I just knew I had to put it! But now I am getting a little bit of an idea as to why he said it. And you aren't exactly wrong; he's not addicted to drugs or anything, but something like that plays a small part in it! I know - I ramble and make no sense whatsoever! Sorry! Anyway, I'm glad you like the story, will update ASAP. Thanks! Hugs and Snugs Amoeba.
I'm glad that the ending to this chapter made you happy! I love a good rescue!Brian! Thank you so much for saying that you are enjoying the story; it means a lot to me! Hugs and Snugs Amoeba.
I am relieved that Brian could rescue Justin, but what would happen if he couldn't make it in time????? I don't want to think about.... Wonderful chapter,sweetie.Thrilled for more Love,Liri
I was relieved as well! I just couldn't resist making Brian all heroic! I didn't really want to think in too much detail about what would happen if Brian was late, either! I had a vague idea, but it was just fog, and I just can't make our Justin suffer too much! I'm afraid of making my story too dark! Even though I love angst, and have healthy doses of the stuff in my fics! I'm so glad you liked the chapter, sweetums, thank you so much for your feedback! I'm writing more as we speak! Lots of love. Hugs and Snugs Amoeba.
I'm so glad you like! Thanks for saying so! Now, Justin's last line! When I was writing this, it just came to me, and I knew that however odd it sounded, it was right for the story! I had no idea why Justin said it, as again, I would have pegged him as being scared, angry or embarrased, as you said. (Yeah, I did write the story, and yes, I am confusing myself!) But no matter what else I put, it didn't sound right, so I stuck with the original, and put my faith in the rusty part of my brain that came up with it to tell me why it came up with that line! And lo and behold, that rusty corner of my brain has not failed me! I don't think! We'll find out in the next chapter! Thanks for the feedback, I'll update ASAP! Hugs and Snugs Amoeba.
“Aww, you’re sweet. My knight in shining Prada. I’ve always known you love me madly, passionately, deeply. But don’t worry, I won’t tell,” Justin giggled weakly, snuggling his shaking form close to Brian, relaxing now that he knew he was safe.
That is so sweet in mist of all the pain..... he still has sweet words for his love....
Thank you so much for the feedback, it means a lot to me! I'm so glad you picked up on the fact that Justin's last comment gave a relief from all the pain, because despite how strange it may seem for Justin to say that, that was kind of what I was trying to do; not make the ending too dark by getting a bit of sweet!Justin in there! Thanks so much! Hugs and Snugs Amoeba.
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But somehow Justin´s last sentence seems off to me...is he on drugs?? Not the reaction I would have expected. I don´t know, relieved perhaps, afraid....but wide, adoring eyes....hhmmm....
Keep posting, I really like the story =)
Vroni
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Justin's last comment is a strange subject, even to me, because at the time this sentence just hit me, and I knew that I had to write it down, knowing that it was somehow right for the story, even though it is a strange thing for Justin to say.
And at the time, I had no idea why Justin said that but I just knew I had to put it! But now I am getting a little bit of an idea as to why he said it. And you aren't exactly wrong; he's not addicted to drugs or anything, but something like that plays a small part in it!
I know - I ramble and make no sense whatsoever! Sorry!
Anyway, I'm glad you like the story, will update ASAP.
Thanks!
Hugs and Snugs
Amoeba.
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Thank you so much for saying that you are enjoying the story; it means a lot to me!
Hugs and Snugs
Amoeba.
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I don't want to think about....
Wonderful chapter,sweetie.Thrilled for more
Love,Liri
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I didn't really want to think in too much detail about what would happen if Brian was late, either! I had a vague idea, but it was just fog, and I just can't make our Justin suffer too much! I'm afraid of making my story too dark! Even though I love angst, and have healthy doses of the stuff in my fics!
I'm so glad you liked the chapter, sweetums, thank you so much for your feedback! I'm writing more as we speak!
Lots of love.
Hugs and Snugs
Amoeba.
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I was also confused with the last line, I thought he'd be embarrased or angry?
But I love this, and can't wait for more!
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Now, Justin's last line! When I was writing this, it just came to me, and I knew that however odd it sounded, it was right for the story!
I had no idea why Justin said it, as again, I would have pegged him as being scared, angry or embarrased, as you said. (Yeah, I did write the story, and yes, I am confusing myself!)
But no matter what else I put, it didn't sound right, so I stuck with the original, and put my faith in the rusty part of my brain that came up with it to tell me why it came up with that line!
And lo and behold, that rusty corner of my brain has not failed me! I don't think! We'll find out in the next chapter!
Thanks for the feedback, I'll update ASAP!
Hugs and Snugs
Amoeba.
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That is so sweet in mist of all the pain..... he still has sweet words for his love....
thanks : hugs : kaylin
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I'm so glad you picked up on the fact that Justin's last comment gave a relief from all the pain, because despite how strange it may seem for Justin to say that, that was kind of what I was trying to do; not make the ending too dark by getting a bit of sweet!Justin in there!
Thanks so much!
Hugs and Snugs
Amoeba.
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