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crazybananatr3e

Lost Causes

Sep 06, 2013 10:54

Title: Lost Causes
Characters/Pairing: Zelo/Youngjae, Junhong/Jongup
Rating: NC17
Warnings: explicit content
Wordcount: 5.5k
Summary: Zelo has a thing for lost causes but how long before he realizes his life needs fixing too? OrphanBlack!au written for kiwi_ism for round 2 of the brownie bunch exchange
A/N: First of all, sorry this is a little (or a lot) ( Read more... )

member: jongup, member: youngjae, ficexchange, rating: nc17, member: junhong

Comments 8

crazybananatr3e September 6 2013, 04:17:59 UTC

spot for kiwi-ism if you wanna comment. I'm so sorry for being late and the mediocre writing. <3

bictory September 6 2013, 14:03:32 UTC

awww this was really sweet, I loved when they went to the orphanage, it was so adorable!! How Zelo finds himself falling for Jae and his voice (hehe Daehyun's cameo) I loved how you described the subtle changes from Junhong and Zelo, it's great how Youngjae sees them and kind of falls in love over again. I wanted to squish Zelo!!! Somehow he seems more appealing than Junhong haha but I guess it's cause Junhong was trapped in a situation he didn't like, otherwise their personality would be the same right? ;__; I liked this concept a lot, it was really interesting *__* ahaha I want to find out more about what happened between Jongup and Junhong ^^ thanks for writing this! ♥

crazybananatr3e September 15 2013, 18:40:20 UTC

Thank you so much for reading and commenting! Ah thank you! I really liked the concept too so thank kiwi_ism for the great prompt! (though I prob didn't do it justice) XD I tried to make their personalities somewhat different because they were different people, though I guess Zelo would be more appealing because the story is told more from his perspective. I couldn't not put Dae in 'cause everyone needs a little Daebutt. ;~; Yes! I hope I'll be able to explore their relationship and characters a little more (perhaps a follow-up story? :3) Thanks for reading~ <3

greasytree September 15 2013, 02:41:13 UTC

This plot is so cool! Thank you for such an amazing story!

crazybananatr3e September 15 2013, 18:35:08 UTC

Thank you for reading and for commenting! ;w; <3

jongbuttbutt September 19 2013, 16:15:38 UTC

This was so so very lovely... At the beginning I was overwhelmed but then everything started falling into place so beautifully and I just wanna curl up into a ball and cry my heart out because this was so bittersweet. I wanna be angry at Junhong for cheating on Youngjae, but I can't because he made Jongup so happy. And I guess that's what I really like about this fic. That I just accept that they did what they had to. And there's that sense of urgency and need and I- I really don't know what to say anymore. I just really loved it.

(is jongup really gonna die? T_T)

follow up story please unnie?

crazybananatr3e September 19 2013, 17:36:56 UTC

AH THANK YOU!! I'm really glad you like it!! and big huugs for taking time to write such a nice comment! <333 (Jongup lives tho!! I can't kill my characters yet I just don't have the heart for that ;~;) I'll try! when/if I'm inspired /worst author ever/ /cries/ thank you so much bb! <33

twiggyrocks2815 October 1 2013, 02:15:27 UTC

I've never seen Orphan Black and don't know anything about it, but I liked this story anyway. It was interesting watching the two clones struggle with each other's lives, and then fall for each other's closest person. I was worried Youngjae would be mad when he found out the truth, but everything turned out okay for everyone, and that was nice :)