Good Night and Sweet Dreams

Sep 04, 2014 01:44

Title: Good night and sweet dreams
Author: crazybananatr3e
Characters/Pairing: daejae, younglo, bangdae
Rating: PG13
Warnings: none
Wordcount: ~8k
Summary: Youngjae's life sucks. He can't sleep and life just sucks.
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golden_kimono September 3 2014, 18:41:18 UTC
Younglo are too cute. <3 I like how they slowly worked their way towards each other and I love how you write. I really enjoyed reading this. :)

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crazybananatr3e September 6 2014, 05:29:21 UTC
Aw, thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it! :) Thanks for reading and commenting! <3

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saxophonic23 September 3 2014, 23:59:50 UTC
I really like how Junhong didn't recognize Youngjae immediately, but I had the sense that Youngjae's familiar to him somehow. It was a nice change! Thanks for sharing :)

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crazybananatr3e September 6 2014, 05:30:44 UTC
XD was that how it came off? It was supposed to be that Junhong recognized him but couldn't believe Youngjae was talking to him because he thought Youngjae had turned him down before. Heheh, guess it didn't come off like that! Thanks for reading and commenting anyway! <3

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rhewoon September 4 2014, 19:01:31 UTC
sorry i got over-excited and left a spot on part one but i'll just comment here u__u (in my defense it was late and i was up doing lin. algebra for hours, ok)

anyway... first of all thank you for writing my prompt!!! and don't worry about it, it was actually more interesting than i thought this prompt could have been. I love yonglo they are so cute in real life and you wrote them just as cutely. their little interactions in the dream parts were nice and sweet. even though junhong didn't know himself or youngjae, the build up to them finding each other was rly ;;;; “It’s okay, it’s just time to go home.” /grabs tissues

AT FIRST I WAS KIND OF SCARED like oh no did junhong forget everything but then everything turned out okay and happy \o/

(also i like the way you wrote daehyun's character. an annoying, food-obsessed pain in youngjae's ass. just like the real thing 8))

btw in the sentence "He leans down and presses a kiss to Youngjae’s cheek." did u mean junhong's cheek?

/hugs thank you <33

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crazybananatr3e September 6 2014, 05:36:11 UTC
Aw, it's alright! Hope you got all your work done! :D

XD I kept switching between prompts 'til the last minute so I'm glad you like this! All your prompts were great though ;u; teehee 'cause they're both cutie pies <3 I'm glad you liked how it turned out!! ♥♥

(Daehyun will always be a butt, so just sticking to facts eheheh)

hmm, I must have! Truly sorry about mistakes and inconsistencies. This is what happens when you don't edit enough ;A; Thanks for letting me know!

♥♥♥

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