Blue Heaven, chapter 10

[crazydiamond_]

Chapter 9 was here.

Comments

[lunnera]

*brushes tears away*

Beautiful. Just... beautiful.

[hardlyfatal]

Thank you!

[readsalot]

So sweet.

I also like the way both of them (especially Arisa) were able to take care of themselves and each other in the heat of danger, and didn't break down until they were safe.

[hardlyfatal]

Thanks! Yes, I'm glad you picked up on that, I was trying to show that this whole pretend marriage thing had them working together as a team even when things got bad.

[xxrubyxsohoxx]

adorable. I like :)

[hardlyfatal]

Good, thanks!

[jenjaina]

I just read through your story up until this point, and am SO hooked. You have a great handle on the characters and their personalities and reactions--the last chapter especially, with Akito, had me shaking in rage! Uo and Yuki is an interesting match, but it's your Tohru and Kyo scenes that I adore most of all. OH, and Hana--SO funny!

Anxiously awaiting the next chapter!

(And hoping for a Kisa appearance at some point)

[hardlyfatal]

I'm so pleased you're feeling so strongly about it! Thank you :)

[evanescence56]

I love this fanfic...it is great!!!!!!! :-D

^_^

[hardlyfatal]

Thank you!