Damn. Excellent. I love poignant porn, and this story felt like canon. Hmmm, I'll never see Kaien/Rukia the same way again. *cheers Rukia* You got some, baby! You write fucking well about fucking that I am truly envious and ever grateful. There's so much romance-novel euphemistic stuff in fanfic--I really appreciate a unflinching look at body parts. This was beautiful smut. You've inspired me. Now I have to flee visiting relatives and write something porno (but with heart! Yes, a more difficult recipe than holiday snickerdoodles!)
I am heartily tired of the euphemistic stuff. Sex in RL is never all flowers and clouds, it's a gritty, sweaty thing and I want to represent it that way.
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Beautifully written, great job.
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that reminds me, chough, that i have to do a hinamori rukia thing, right? heh heh
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You write fucking well about fucking that I am truly envious and ever grateful. There's so much romance-novel euphemistic stuff in fanfic--I really appreciate a unflinching look at body parts.
This was beautiful smut. You've inspired me. Now I have to flee visiting relatives and write something porno (but with heart! Yes, a more difficult recipe than holiday snickerdoodles!)
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Thanks for reading, I'm glad you liked it :)
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kimper :)
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