re: the pairing, i liked the way you explained it. (So when he spies her, tall and buxom with eyes that are both sweet and sad at the same there, he sees a beauty in the way she moves.) so even if *i* personally cant see anything *beautiful* about her, at least i know youryumi can so it makes sense.
i love the way you bracket (cheeky) things.
and this is a gorgeous fic. *love* the way it is so thoughfully intricate. (any luck of getting yumichika/ isane? she's beautifully exquisite too!) *grinz*
heh, it was 2am and my eyes somehow kinked out on me. misread it as someone else. *facepalm* cant think why, especially since i adore yumi/ isane.. tsk tsk tsk.
1st paragraph: "He likes TO think he knows all the ways." You had "the" instead of "to." I loooove how the narrative voice is steeped in Yumichika. I soooo believe he's a beautyphile here. And the bit about the equal heights was perfect! *kisses fingers* Two underappreciated characters in the Bleach world. And I love how you play with gender--this was very enjoyable!
Love love love!!! I don't understand why they always say Yumichika is gay; I find him... very masculine actually, he's just narcisstic like what you've said! And Isane, gawd, she's severly neglected and I find her very pretty, with an understated beauty that.. well, you've described it so well here. :) "he likes the curves and hollows of her cheek and ching thus revealed" I think its chin? not ching? I like so many phrases in this ficlet, but my fav has to be this: It is evident in how perspiration turns her skin from silk to velvet, in the heavy-lidded gleam of her eyes, in the slow arch of her throat when he sinks himself inside her.
Eei, I like this. ^_^ My friends and I have also agreed that Yumichika is "beautisexual," as we call it. XD I liked how you fleshed out their personalities in this. Really beautifully written, too! :)
*laughs* Yeah, I can see some m/m pairings for him, but it is lovely seeing him written as leaning towards the womenz. (*laughs* Although my friends and I have taken to pairing him with Soi Fong)
With Soi Fong, really? Wow. Now, that's one pairing I have trouble seeing, mostly because I see SF as rather desperately in love with Yoruichi. But hey, if it's written well enough, I can believe almost anything.
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re: the pairing, i liked the way you explained it. (So when he spies her, tall and buxom with eyes that are both sweet and sad at the same there, he sees a beauty in the way she moves.) so even if *i* personally cant see anything *beautiful* about her, at least i know youryumi can so it makes sense.
i love the way you bracket (cheeky) things.
and this is a gorgeous fic. *love* the way it is so thoughfully intricate. (any luck of getting yumichika/ isane? she's beautifully exquisite too!) *grinz*
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I loooove how the narrative voice is steeped in Yumichika. I soooo believe he's a beautyphile here. And the bit about the equal heights was perfect! *kisses fingers*
Two underappreciated characters in the Bleach world. And I love how you play with gender--this was very enjoyable!
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"he likes the curves and hollows of her cheek and ching thus revealed"
I think its chin? not ching?
I like so many phrases in this ficlet, but my fav has to be this:
It is evident in how perspiration turns her skin from silk to velvet, in the heavy-lidded gleam of her eyes, in the slow arch of her throat when he sinks himself inside her.
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*memories~*
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*laughs* Yeah, I can see some m/m pairings for him, but it is lovely seeing him written as leaning towards the womenz. (*laughs* Although my friends and I have taken to pairing him with Soi Fong)
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