Tempus Fidgets, chapter 5

[crazydiamond_]

Yes, amazingly, I'm updating this. Wonders never cease.

All previous chapters can be found here.

Comments

[khylarenelf]

SQUEE

Oh my dear, how I missed this one! And Jack, dear, lovely, lecherous Jack...mmmmm....[twitch]

I will do whatever it takes to get you to write more of this!

[hardlyfatal]

Haha, thanks! I really do want to finish this, so here's hoping!

[silentrequiem]

Oh you have my undying gratitude for writing another chapter to this story. *claps hands* Bravo.
I have a very soft spot in my heart for your Pirate crosses (especially your Tale of Two Captains) since you do them with such flair.

Thank you so much!

[hardlyfatal]

I have a soft spot for them, too, and wish my interest in live-action fandoms hadn't flagged in recent years, but...

You're so welcome, thanks for reading!

[ariyanaforever]

Yay the Jack and Dawn interaction was great. I could so easily picture it.

[hardlyfatal]

Good! I'm so happy their scene(s) worked :)

[fan_elune]

Oh gods. I'd missed this story so much. Jack is spot on - spot on, darling, down to his physical manneurisms. And oh how I love everything in this chapter. They're all so very in character. Your portrayal of the Turners is heartwarming. I loved the fact that Jack dreadlocked the kids' hair. And just, all of it. It makes me smile and feel all warm inside. Thank you.

[hardlyfatal]

[beams happily] I'm so happy you liked it! Jack is the most fun in the world to write, but I do fret about getting him just so. Thanks for letting me know I'm on the right track :)