This is for riddering, as I heard she was feeling down and might like a bit of warped Arrankar/Aizen/Hinamori triangle stuff. There will be three parts; this is the first. Concrit most welcome.
Even as crack, this should not work. I mean, there is crack and then there is reaching. Momo and Grimmjow??? They're barely worthy of being considered for consolation shipping.
But smack me hard for my skepticism, because they more than work. Grimmjow is easy enough to lust for, but Momo, in this fic, comes alive for me in a way that she doesn't in the manga and using Aizen as the thread that ties them is just brilliant.
And the way they are put together here is like reading the Bleach version of East of Eden as written by the Bronte sisters but with sex and really good sex too. *;-)
Excellent, excellent stuff and I eagerly look forward to the next part!
Heh, Cinnie, you did it again. I still dislike Momo and adore the way you write her. I'm on the edge of my seat for the drama... and looking forward to more!
Okay, wow. First of all? I'm just floored that this was dedicated to me and...yeah, wow. Thank you so much. It really made my day and possibly my entire week to see this. You are very kind and I'm just going to mention the insane squeaky noises that were made when I saw this and as I read it instead of actually inflicting them on you
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I don't see their relationship as non-reciprocal at all, and indeed included a mention of how Aizen needed her subservience just as much as she needed his dominance-- he was just as enslaved as she. I plan on exploring this more in the following two parts, if I ever get to writing the damned things.
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But smack me hard for my skepticism, because they more than work. Grimmjow is easy enough to lust for, but Momo, in this fic, comes alive for me in a way that she doesn't in the manga and using Aizen as the thread that ties them is just brilliant.
And the way they are put together here is like reading the Bleach version of East of Eden as written by the Bronte sisters but with sex and really good sex too. *;-)
Excellent, excellent stuff and I eagerly look forward to the next part!
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I don't see their relationship as non-reciprocal at all, and indeed included a mention of how Aizen needed her subservience just as much as she needed his dominance-- he was just as enslaved as she. I plan on exploring this more in the following two parts, if I ever get to writing the damned things.
So happy you liked it :)
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