Ouran fic: Bee to the Blossom: Tamaki

[crazydiamond_]

This is NC17, youall. Humor + crack + smut. Enjoy.

There's also a version where Haruhi turns to Mori instead of Tamaki: that's available here.

Artwork by moko_moko-nee-chan; story dedicated to her for that favour, plus the fact that she's fabulous.

Comments

[morbid_musings]

Firstly, I am pleasantly surprised because you've managed to make me feel touched and bemused, amongst other things.

Apart from this fic being well-written, it is really in-character, especially on Tamaki's side. He is extremely sweet and innocent in the story; it keeps making me wish that there were more guys like that in real life. Perhaps, it is me being old-fashioned, but it was nice to see that a certain innocence prevailed in the fanfic and that the kissing/love scenes were a bit clumsy at first. Furthermore, you have rendered the situation tastefully- very much so.

[hardlyfatal]

Thank you so much for your feedback! I appreciate that you took the time to describe what you liked, and why-- most people just say "i liked it!" but this helped me to know where I did well :)

[paynesgrey]

I already have much love for you, but reading this just makes me love you tons and tons more. This is such an excellent in-character smut, and I haven't read many that could pull off what you pulled off here.

Mmmm...I've missed the Cinnie smut. So good.

I'm also glad to see you favor a bit of Haruhi/Mori too. These are probably my two favorite pairings in this anime so far.

I can't wait to read more by you. I'll fave this in case...:ahem: I want to come back again...Hehehehehe

[hardlyfatal]

I *adore* Haruhi/Mori, perhaps even more than Haruhi/Tamaki, truth to tell.

So glad you liked it! (please forgive me for taking until now to reply to this, I suck)

[toriru4ever]

omg this was brilliantly smexxy, humorous, sweet!!!!! *claps*
though I think to be fair Haruhi owes Tamaki a blow job in a sequel :3
hehe
btw you may want to up the yen figures cuz 500 yen is approximately $5
and that's kinda cheap for a blow job x_x

anyways, i couldn't stop giggling and cooing over this fic! definitely one of the best ouran smut fics i've read! ^o^

[hardlyfatal]

Yeah, I fixed the yen thing... I thought it was just one extra 0 but it's two. All fixed now :)

Thanks so much for reading, glad you liked it!

[caliborn]

Oh wow!

You did a very nice job with this! You managed to keep everyone in character and succeeded in giving the fic the same sort of vibe as the manga or anime. And you had me laughing out loud at some parts!

I especially love the little comic strip, and Haruhi's comment at the end: "No, wait. I'll tell my dad, and he'll kill you. A lot." XD Too perfect.

I would like to invite you to post this wonderful fic at a brand new Ouran Fic Community, Ouran_Het, so even more people could enjoy it. Or, in leiu of that, would you mind if I posted it there with every credit to you? I really do enjoy this fic and would appreciate it very much. ^_^

[hardlyfatal]

Thanks so much! I'm so sorry it's taken me so long to get back to you, I am terrible at noticing I have replies to my posts :(

I just posted to ouran_het with the other version of this story featuring Mori (and also linking to this one with Tamaki).

So happy you enjoyed it!

[biases]

Wow, what a great fic! I'm not usually one for NC-17 stuff, but you really got their awkwardness down pat and everyone was marvellously in-character, making it a pleasure to read. I'm so glad it was Tamaki she asked, and those scenario? HILARIOUS.

Fantastic writing, and I'll be putting this in my memories. :)

[hardlyfatal]

Thank you very much!