To Sleep

Oct 14, 2010 22:20

If I were to sleep, what would it be that I dream ( Read more... )

writing, poetry

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crazygitar October 18 2010, 20:05:37 UTC
Thank you :-) I just wrote it as it was late and I felt obliged to write something new. This just kind of came out, but it was all with the mind of culminating in that last line. Good to know the effect worked, but I think it needs re-writing in the main stanzas.

And don't worry about the messaging :-)

Thunder! Exciting times. It's pretty rare her as well...we just get endless drizzle or grey skies.

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