Harry Potter: Walking on Ice

[crazylixi]

Title: Walking on Ice
Fandom: Harry Potter
Characters: Harry/Ron
Word Count: 1378
Rating: PG-13
Summary: It was the coldest winter Ron had ever seen at Hogwarts - just his luck that Harry wanted to go down to the lake. Well, alright, maybe it really was lucky.
Author's Notes: Hum, this is my first H/R fic in a while, and probably my best so far.

Comments

[abovethestars]

wonderful little piece! I could see them out of the lake together in the bright sun reflecting off the snow. good job!

[crazylixi]

Yes, that was the scene that basically spawned this fic in the first place. The idea of "winter wonderland" Hogwarts was eating away at my brain. Good to know you liked it!

[theidlefind]

Mmm, that was a warm cozy place out on the ice. The scene was set so well I felt chilly and cuddly inside all at once.

[crazylixi]

Thank you very much for commenting, and sorry for the late reply. Glad to know my little one-shot had that effect.

[pghpatronus]

This is excellent!

Your layering of meaning is brilliant. "Trust me." Awesome.

"Don’t talk," he said. "It doesn’t matter.

Ron disagreed. It mattered more than anything, but he couldn’t tell Harry that.
Perfect conclusion.

[crazylixi]

Thank you very much for saying that. I actually tried about five conclusions before that one, but it ended up being the one with the most meaning (at least in my opinion).