Pretending

[crazyshineeluvr]

A/N - Hey guys. This is my first post here on LiveJournal and I'm still getting the hang of things. This is something I posted on Asian Fanfics and decided to re-post it here. Sorry if it is really bad but I'm still trying out my hand in writing. Please leave comments and tell me what you think ^_

Comments

[shin_ah_mi]

a fail?!!!
it's a win girl!!! a total and absolute one!!!
i love your writing!!! and how you expose emotions!!
the plot is very good and really angsty!!!
but beautiful
really is
will wait for more from you

[crazyshineeluvr]

Really?! You really think this is a win?! Thanks bb ^^. I was really worried it wouldn't make sense but lots of people like it. Thanks for commenting and I'll try to write more fast!

[crazyshineeluvr]

Thanks for reading ^^

[purplesilklace]

Aaah, you know, I usually just skip past the EunHae when browsing Miracle (it's so much of it!) and just, deathfic in general, but your summary; "Hyukjae likes to pretend that Donghae is just sleeping" really got me there! So, here I am, and then of course - review you shall have :D

This was really well-executed, a kind of unpolished diamond. I like when authors tweak their way of writing so that they kind of... How to put this... Allow you into the characters head? Like what you did there when he gets the call.

I also appreciate the feeling of hope you got in there at the end, since angst like this tend to get so so SO heavy.

You are the happiest when you're asleep, so he deems it fit that the other was sleeping, because all he ever wanted was for Donghae to be happy.
Ah that line. And the entire second paragraph. I like how you paint out his pretending.

Ah how did this comment get so long T^T' now I can't comment on your other fanfic.
Ah btw! Welcome to livejournal! :D

[crazyshineeluvr]

haha! OMG you have no idea how happy your comment made me. I love long comments so don't worry. BTW thanks for welcoming me ^^

Oooh. You compared my story to an unpolished diamond. I feel so honored. And I'm glad my story "spoke" to you and that out of all the Eunhae in this community (and you're right there is a lot) you decided to read my fic ^^

Thanks for reading and reviewing it!

*hugs