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You for You

Dec 14, 2009 20:00

Title: You for You
Author: crazywriter10
Pairing: Kirk/McCoy (Technically Kirk/girl!McCoy)
Rating: NC-17 and R combined.
Warning: Explicit Slash (technically het) and genderbending
Disclaimer: Not. Mine.
Word Count: 6,977

Summary: A transporter malfunction leaves Bones as a woman. Add some communication issues between Bones and Jim and end up with heartache ( Read more... )

fan:fiction, bones, kirk/mccoy, kirk, kirk/bones, mccoy

Comments 19

ellie_pierson December 15 2009, 01:41:35 UTC

I love it when an author starts off a story with "this is the filthiest thing I've written." It always means it will be a good story.

crazywriter10 December 15 2009, 01:53:01 UTC

Thank you. :) Now I just need to get the blush to tone it down a notch.

karmic_fic December 15 2009, 01:55:36 UTC

this was totally awesome!!! i really enjoyed the introspection, i think you were spot on with their reactions. Thank you so much for sharing!!!

crazywriter10 December 15 2009, 03:51:07 UTC

Thank you. I really wasn't sure about..any of it, really, but..thank you! :)

oh_rattlesnake December 15 2009, 02:06:00 UTC

So, genderbending really isn't my thing, at all really. But this, it just may have converted me. Loved it, super sexy yet oh so sweet, such a fantastic combination.

crazywriter10 December 15 2009, 03:51:21 UTC

Thank you. :)

secretsolitaire December 15 2009, 02:47:38 UTC

I enjoyed that! The sex was yummy, and their discomfort with each other seemed believable.

crazywriter10 December 15 2009, 03:51:49 UTC

Thank you. :)

missmarie9 December 15 2009, 02:56:19 UTC

This is the best gender-switch fic I've ever read. It's everything I've been waiting to read, what I've been looking for. Most gender-switch fics seem to be primarily based on one of them getting a vagina and thrilled to the bone to test it out.

But you, you put in this the insecurity all women feel when we don't know how to read a man. And the fact that you included Bones' uncertainty at having sex for the first time, being a virgin, that he has to let himself relax in order to trust Jim with that part of herself.

Thanks you for writing this.

crazywriter10 December 15 2009, 03:53:32 UTC

Thank you for such high praise. And I honestly couldn't see someone like Bones being all gung-ho with his new parts, even if he is a doctor and fundamentally knows what he's for. I honestly thought he would be nervous and unsure and just ran with that.

Thank you again for the praise and for reading.