You can try
Title: You can try
Author: cream4me
Genre: male/male,
Band: SHINee
Pairing: Ontae, implied Onkey, Onho and Jongkey
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: Stop fucking reminding me…
Summary: Taemin will never replace Kibum
Warning: orgasm denial..sort of. Dom!Onew
Lee Taemin
Is driving me fuckin crazy. How you say? I’ll tell you how. Because he is the biggest fucking slut on the face of this earth…at least he will be when I get through with him hehe.
He has no one to blame but himself really. Nobody told him that he had to suck on popsicles the way he does. Slowly thrusting it in and out of his mouth, slurping up the sweet juices like his life depended on it. Sure it’s for a photo shoot but for fucks sake!! Or how all of the sudden he just HAS to dance in extremely short tight shorts…I actually think he might have stolen them from SNSD.
So when he came to me with the hopes of replacing Kibum. Since he was now in a relationship with Jonghyun I agreed. I still had Minho but I wanted someone who wasn’t going to put up much of a fight.
“Stop bullshitting and take it you fuckin slut.”
The momentary choking noises had stopped and the familiar slurping sounds could now be heard. Taemin is so good at sucking dick…at least that’s what I think. I can’t tell you how many times I’ve fantasized about having those full thick lips sucking on my dick…
Like right now…Wrapped so tight around my dick to the point where it must be painful for him.
But I could care less. I don’t ever want him to stop. But right now he’s pissing me off. I know he take more than this. I move the hand that is wrapped around the base of my dick and force him to take more. He whimpers, chokes and tries to pull away but I’m not about to let that happen.
“Gag on my dick bitch.”
He makes a pained sound in the back of his throat and it only turns me on more. The way the sound vibrates through my dick. But he is still trying to get away.
So I grab both sides of his head and start to fuck his face.
“It’s the only way your gonna learn how to take it…So get use to it.” I growl out
I get a couple good thrust in before and I feel him start to bite down. I immediately release him and watch as he coughs and tries to catch his breath.
“You need to be more careful Taemin. You were the one that came to me so I suggest you act like you stop fucking around.” I say darkly.
“And you need to stop being an asshole! I’ve never done this before!” he yells, eyes defiant.
It’s a very familiar look. Reminds me of…Kibum. He had the same look in his eyes years ago. Always trying to resist.
Minho isn’t the only one who likes a challenge…Hmph, I know just how to fix that.
“W..why are you smirking like that?” he says trying to back away.
“You’re about to find out.”
At this he tries to make a run for it but I grab his ankle and pull him back down to the floor. Causing him to smash his knee onto the wood floors. He moves into the fetal position and groans in pain while trying to sooth his aching limp.
“I told you to be more careful Taemin. See why you should listen to your hyungs?”
“Fuck you!” he hisses.
I laugh
“I plan on doin just that.”
I flip him to his back and hold down his arms. He struggles to get free but I’m a lot stronger than he thinks.
“Now now Taemin…We can do this one of two ways.” I say looking into his eyes.
“One…You can stop fighting and making this harder than it has to be and just enjoy it…Or…”
“Or?”
“I take it by force…and you wouldn’t like that.”
He bites his lips and I notice his pupils dilate.
“Oh what’s this? Our Taemin likes to be dominated?” I ask with a smug grin.
He looks away in shame and I force his head back towards me.
“Tell me Taemin…Would you like it if your hyung took advantage of you?”
He stays quiet and again looks away. So…I did the only thing that would get his attention. I slapped him…hard.
“Nnnggg!” he groans out.
“I asked you a question bitch…Now answer me.”
The definite look is back in his eye and I can already tell how this is gonna play out. I caress his face…stroking my thumb across the bottom of his lip before moving down to his neck. I give him one final chance to speak up but when I’m meet with pleading eyes I can’t help the play into his kink.
I grab his throat and apply enough pressure to leave him slightly gasping.
“I said answer me.” I say one last time and another slap to the face to prove a point.
“Y..yes. Please…use me.” he moans out, head thrown back in ecstasy, trying to grind his straining erection against my now flaccid dick. And it’s like the sweetest music to my ears.
“Uh uh uh…not so fast Taemin. I’m not even hard anymore. I think you need to fix that.”
I stand up and grab his hair, pulling him to his knees and forcing him to crawl behind me. I get back into my previous position on the couch still holding him by the head.
He looks so beautiful like this. Face flushed, tears lining his eyes, eyes completely blackened by pure lust.
“Suck.”
He immediately starts to lick the head and along the shaft, trying his hardest to revive me.
“I’m starting to get disappointed…You’ll have to do better than that slut.”
He moves down to my sac and swirls his tongue around my balls before taking one in and sucking lightly. He sucks on it for awhile before he sucks the second one in and makes quick work massaging them.
I bite my lip and throw my head back. I look down on him and meet his eyes.
“There ya go Taemin…such a good boy. See I knew you could do it.”
He moans and working harder at keeping me interested. I thread my fingers through his hair and cup his face, again thumbing his bottom lip. I pull him back and his releases my sac with a loud pop sound.
His lips are cherry red and he looks out of breath. It’s not quite the image I’m looking for yet but soon…Soon I will see him completely broken. He tries to move back to my dick but I have different plans for him.
“Lay back and fuck yourself.”
He looks embarrassed but stills obeys. He sucks three of his fingers, slurping and moaning as he does before he presses the first finger to his hole.
“Open yourself up slut.”
He uses his other hand to grab his ass and spread it apart to open himself more. And then the presses the finger inside.
“Nnngg.” he whimpers
“What’s wrong Taemin?” I say with a smirk.
“Ahh…it...it hurts hyung. I…I c-can’t.”
A virgin…I should have known
“Do you need me to do it for me?” I say stroking myself.
“Y--yes please hyung…please.” he pants harshly removing his finger.
“Stay.” I say as I walk to our room to retrieve some lube. When I come back Taemin looks like he is in more control of his breathing and when he notices me he spreads his legs as far as he can holding them with his arms.
“Oh such a good boy my little slut. Are you sure you haven’t done this before?’ I tease
He starts to shake his head no but it only results in him arching his back completely off the floor as I shove two lube slicked fingers into his tight hole.
“AHH HYUNG! DON’T! IT HURTS!”
“Oh shut up bitch.” I say with a bored stare. “It’s not that bad.”
I continue to thrust me fingers inside him and he is a total mess at this point. Sweat is covering his entire body, his skin red and hot. And he is moaning like a shameless whore.
“See...now isn’t that better?”
“Ahh!! Yes! Yes please give me more…Oh god I need it!“ he moans.
I move my fingers closer to his prostate and then thrust directly into it.
“OH FUCK HYUNG!!”
He tried to lift his head to see but I hit his spot again and he drops it sobbing. His hips are moving to meet my hand and I can tell he is trying is hardest not to touch himself.
I gotta say…I’m impressed. Kibum didn’t last this long.
“Nnng hyung…ah…”he whimpers out and I think I spoke too soon.
Tale tell signs of an orgasm are starting to show. His thighs and stomach are starting to tense and his dick is twitching at an alarming rate
“You don’t have permission to cum slut. You better hold it.”
At this he lets out a disbelieving gasp like he really can’t believe I said that.
“P..please…please let me cum…it hurts so much hyung.” he says and I think he’s been spending too much time with Jonghyun because those puppy eyes are looking very familiar. Too bad for him because if he doesn’t work with the original it sure as fuck isn’t about to work with an amateur imitator.
“This is your punishment. I won’t put a cock ring on you but you have to keep yourself from cumming.”
He looks at me confused for a moment and just when he opens his mouth I thrust my dick deep inside him. His mouth forms a silent ‘O’ and I don’t even wait for him to adjust.
I’m too far gone to care about whether or not to his body is ok.
“NGGGG HYUNG!! I CAN’T...I’M GONNA CUM ALREADY!!”
I stop
You CAN’T be serious….
“We only just started you slut and you’re already about to cum? Maybe I do need to put a cock ring on you.”
I pull out and got to get the cock ring. I come back to see Taemin clutching his thighs…Deep red crescent marks deep in his legs.
“You really are a good boy Taeminnie.”
“D..does this mean you’ll let me cum? Please don’t…please don’t put that on me.” he says eyes the ring…afraid.
“You’re not that good. You still fought with me and for that you will still be punished. So shut up and take it.”
I fasten it on and push his legs up until his ankles reach his ears and spread him wide open. Thank god for a dancers body.
“Ready Taemin?”
He shakes his head, fear in his eyes
“No”
I smirk and push back in. He screams out and fresh tears pour from his eyes.
“Hm..you feel good Taemin. I should have done this a lot sooner.” I moan as he clenches around me.
“Oh fuck! Fuck me harder Hyung! It feels so good.” he sobs.
I listen but it was more because I wanted to and not because he asked. I speed up and his moans grow louder and louder with each thrust and I’m a little worried our neighbors can hear.
“You being to loud Taemin…shut up.”
He bits his lips and attempts to hold in his moans and then I hit his spot and he lets out a choked moan slash sob. I watch as his dick twitches and then I see his stomach tighten. He’s about to cum…sort of.
I let go of one of his legs and lean over him, grabbing him by the throat and squeezing.
“I meant it when I said not to cum Taemin…even if it is dry.”
His sobs get louder and soon he’s gasping for breath.
“Hyung I..I can’t, it’s cu--”
He doesn’t get a chance to finish his sentence before I pull out denying him orgasm and slapping him hard enough to cause his lip to split.
“What did I say Taemin?” I ask darkly.
He is still trying to catch his breath when I hit him again, getting impatient.
“No…not to cum…I’m sorry Hyung. I tried, I really did but it was too good.”
“Get up.” I say in a harsh tone
He moves on shaky legs and it taking him to long so I make him move faster. Again I grab him by the hair and pull him up.
“Open your mouth.”
He does and I thrust deep in his mouth causing him to gag. He lifts his hands up with the intent to hold onto me.
“Hand behind your fuckin back bitch.” I growl as I grab the other side of his head. He whimpers as I force more and more into his mouth and eventually into his throat. I push pass his gag reflex and stop when the head of my dick is nestled deep into his throat.
By now his breathing is very labored and I can see him slowing lose consciousness, but I’m far from caring.
I start to fuck his throat and right before he passes out I pull out stroking myself and kicking him back on his back. I thrust back into him and his mouth opens but nothing comes out, the moan trapped in his throat.
I lean down and lick a path from his neck to his ear.
“You’re such a bad slut Taemin.” I say grabbing his throat. “You’ll never be better than Kibum. Even Minho is a better fuck than you.”
And he starts to cry again...this time because of his hurt feelings.
I speed up and soon I can feel the coil in the pit of my stomach and with a few more thrust I’m cumming inside our maknae with images of Kibum sprawled out before me while I ride out my orgasm.
When I pull out I notice he’s still crying.
“P..please Hyung…take it off.”
I snarl but do it anyway, taking pity on the kid. Immediately his hand is on his dick pumping.
“AH HYUNG!” he moans out as cum shoots from his dick and lands onto his chest and stomach
I watch him with disinterest. He looks back at me before he hangs his head in shame looking at the mess he made of the floor.
“Clean this shit up.” I say walking away. “Oh and Taemin. Don’t come to me again.” I say looking back and there it is.
The look of utter despair, his spirit broken.
END
Author: cream4me
Genre: male/male,
Band: SHINee
Pairing: Ontae, implied Onkey, Onho and Jongkey
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: Stop fucking reminding me…
Summary: Taemin will never replace Kibum
Warning: orgasm denial..sort of. Dom!Onew
Lee Taemin
Is driving me fuckin crazy. How you say? I’ll tell you how. Because he is the biggest fucking slut on the face of this earth…at least he will be when I get through with him hehe.
He has no one to blame but himself really. Nobody told him that he had to suck on popsicles the way he does. Slowly thrusting it in and out of his mouth, slurping up the sweet juices like his life depended on it. Sure it’s for a photo shoot but for fucks sake!! Or how all of the sudden he just HAS to dance in extremely short tight shorts…I actually think he might have stolen them from SNSD.
So when he came to me with the hopes of replacing Kibum. Since he was now in a relationship with Jonghyun I agreed. I still had Minho but I wanted someone who wasn’t going to put up much of a fight.
“Stop bullshitting and take it you fuckin slut.”
The momentary choking noises had stopped and the familiar slurping sounds could now be heard. Taemin is so good at sucking dick…at least that’s what I think. I can’t tell you how many times I’ve fantasized about having those full thick lips sucking on my dick…
Like right now…Wrapped so tight around my dick to the point where it must be painful for him.
But I could care less. I don’t ever want him to stop. But right now he’s pissing me off. I know he take more than this. I move the hand that is wrapped around the base of my dick and force him to take more. He whimpers, chokes and tries to pull away but I’m not about to let that happen.
“Gag on my dick bitch.”
He makes a pained sound in the back of his throat and it only turns me on more. The way the sound vibrates through my dick. But he is still trying to get away.
So I grab both sides of his head and start to fuck his face.
“It’s the only way your gonna learn how to take it…So get use to it.” I growl out
I get a couple good thrust in before and I feel him start to bite down. I immediately release him and watch as he coughs and tries to catch his breath.
“You need to be more careful Taemin. You were the one that came to me so I suggest you act like you stop fucking around.” I say darkly.
“And you need to stop being an asshole! I’ve never done this before!” he yells, eyes defiant.
It’s a very familiar look. Reminds me of…Kibum. He had the same look in his eyes years ago. Always trying to resist.
Minho isn’t the only one who likes a challenge…Hmph, I know just how to fix that.
“W..why are you smirking like that?” he says trying to back away.
“You’re about to find out.”
At this he tries to make a run for it but I grab his ankle and pull him back down to the floor. Causing him to smash his knee onto the wood floors. He moves into the fetal position and groans in pain while trying to sooth his aching limp.
“I told you to be more careful Taemin. See why you should listen to your hyungs?”
“Fuck you!” he hisses.
I laugh
“I plan on doin just that.”
I flip him to his back and hold down his arms. He struggles to get free but I’m a lot stronger than he thinks.
“Now now Taemin…We can do this one of two ways.” I say looking into his eyes.
“One…You can stop fighting and making this harder than it has to be and just enjoy it…Or…”
“Or?”
“I take it by force…and you wouldn’t like that.”
He bites his lips and I notice his pupils dilate.
“Oh what’s this? Our Taemin likes to be dominated?” I ask with a smug grin.
He looks away in shame and I force his head back towards me.
“Tell me Taemin…Would you like it if your hyung took advantage of you?”
He stays quiet and again looks away. So…I did the only thing that would get his attention. I slapped him…hard.
“Nnnggg!” he groans out.
“I asked you a question bitch…Now answer me.”
The definite look is back in his eye and I can already tell how this is gonna play out. I caress his face…stroking my thumb across the bottom of his lip before moving down to his neck. I give him one final chance to speak up but when I’m meet with pleading eyes I can’t help the play into his kink.
I grab his throat and apply enough pressure to leave him slightly gasping.
“I said answer me.” I say one last time and another slap to the face to prove a point.
“Y..yes. Please…use me.” he moans out, head thrown back in ecstasy, trying to grind his straining erection against my now flaccid dick. And it’s like the sweetest music to my ears.
“Uh uh uh…not so fast Taemin. I’m not even hard anymore. I think you need to fix that.”
I stand up and grab his hair, pulling him to his knees and forcing him to crawl behind me. I get back into my previous position on the couch still holding him by the head.
He looks so beautiful like this. Face flushed, tears lining his eyes, eyes completely blackened by pure lust.
“Suck.”
He immediately starts to lick the head and along the shaft, trying his hardest to revive me.
“I’m starting to get disappointed…You’ll have to do better than that slut.”
He moves down to my sac and swirls his tongue around my balls before taking one in and sucking lightly. He sucks on it for awhile before he sucks the second one in and makes quick work massaging them.
I bite my lip and throw my head back. I look down on him and meet his eyes.
“There ya go Taemin…such a good boy. See I knew you could do it.”
He moans and working harder at keeping me interested. I thread my fingers through his hair and cup his face, again thumbing his bottom lip. I pull him back and his releases my sac with a loud pop sound.
His lips are cherry red and he looks out of breath. It’s not quite the image I’m looking for yet but soon…Soon I will see him completely broken. He tries to move back to my dick but I have different plans for him.
“Lay back and fuck yourself.”
He looks embarrassed but stills obeys. He sucks three of his fingers, slurping and moaning as he does before he presses the first finger to his hole.
“Open yourself up slut.”
He uses his other hand to grab his ass and spread it apart to open himself more. And then the presses the finger inside.
“Nnngg.” he whimpers
“What’s wrong Taemin?” I say with a smirk.
“Ahh…it...it hurts hyung. I…I c-can’t.”
A virgin…I should have known
“Do you need me to do it for me?” I say stroking myself.
“Y--yes please hyung…please.” he pants harshly removing his finger.
“Stay.” I say as I walk to our room to retrieve some lube. When I come back Taemin looks like he is in more control of his breathing and when he notices me he spreads his legs as far as he can holding them with his arms.
“Oh such a good boy my little slut. Are you sure you haven’t done this before?’ I tease
He starts to shake his head no but it only results in him arching his back completely off the floor as I shove two lube slicked fingers into his tight hole.
“AHH HYUNG! DON’T! IT HURTS!”
“Oh shut up bitch.” I say with a bored stare. “It’s not that bad.”
I continue to thrust me fingers inside him and he is a total mess at this point. Sweat is covering his entire body, his skin red and hot. And he is moaning like a shameless whore.
“See...now isn’t that better?”
“Ahh!! Yes! Yes please give me more…Oh god I need it!“ he moans.
I move my fingers closer to his prostate and then thrust directly into it.
“OH FUCK HYUNG!!”
He tried to lift his head to see but I hit his spot again and he drops it sobbing. His hips are moving to meet my hand and I can tell he is trying is hardest not to touch himself.
I gotta say…I’m impressed. Kibum didn’t last this long.
“Nnng hyung…ah…”he whimpers out and I think I spoke too soon.
Tale tell signs of an orgasm are starting to show. His thighs and stomach are starting to tense and his dick is twitching at an alarming rate
“You don’t have permission to cum slut. You better hold it.”
At this he lets out a disbelieving gasp like he really can’t believe I said that.
“P..please…please let me cum…it hurts so much hyung.” he says and I think he’s been spending too much time with Jonghyun because those puppy eyes are looking very familiar. Too bad for him because if he doesn’t work with the original it sure as fuck isn’t about to work with an amateur imitator.
“This is your punishment. I won’t put a cock ring on you but you have to keep yourself from cumming.”
He looks at me confused for a moment and just when he opens his mouth I thrust my dick deep inside him. His mouth forms a silent ‘O’ and I don’t even wait for him to adjust.
I’m too far gone to care about whether or not to his body is ok.
“NGGGG HYUNG!! I CAN’T...I’M GONNA CUM ALREADY!!”
I stop
You CAN’T be serious….
“We only just started you slut and you’re already about to cum? Maybe I do need to put a cock ring on you.”
I pull out and got to get the cock ring. I come back to see Taemin clutching his thighs…Deep red crescent marks deep in his legs.
“You really are a good boy Taeminnie.”
“D..does this mean you’ll let me cum? Please don’t…please don’t put that on me.” he says eyes the ring…afraid.
“You’re not that good. You still fought with me and for that you will still be punished. So shut up and take it.”
I fasten it on and push his legs up until his ankles reach his ears and spread him wide open. Thank god for a dancers body.
“Ready Taemin?”
He shakes his head, fear in his eyes
“No”
I smirk and push back in. He screams out and fresh tears pour from his eyes.
“Hm..you feel good Taemin. I should have done this a lot sooner.” I moan as he clenches around me.
“Oh fuck! Fuck me harder Hyung! It feels so good.” he sobs.
I listen but it was more because I wanted to and not because he asked. I speed up and his moans grow louder and louder with each thrust and I’m a little worried our neighbors can hear.
“You being to loud Taemin…shut up.”
He bits his lips and attempts to hold in his moans and then I hit his spot and he lets out a choked moan slash sob. I watch as his dick twitches and then I see his stomach tighten. He’s about to cum…sort of.
I let go of one of his legs and lean over him, grabbing him by the throat and squeezing.
“I meant it when I said not to cum Taemin…even if it is dry.”
His sobs get louder and soon he’s gasping for breath.
“Hyung I..I can’t, it’s cu--”
He doesn’t get a chance to finish his sentence before I pull out denying him orgasm and slapping him hard enough to cause his lip to split.
“What did I say Taemin?” I ask darkly.
He is still trying to catch his breath when I hit him again, getting impatient.
“No…not to cum…I’m sorry Hyung. I tried, I really did but it was too good.”
“Get up.” I say in a harsh tone
He moves on shaky legs and it taking him to long so I make him move faster. Again I grab him by the hair and pull him up.
“Open your mouth.”
He does and I thrust deep in his mouth causing him to gag. He lifts his hands up with the intent to hold onto me.
“Hand behind your fuckin back bitch.” I growl as I grab the other side of his head. He whimpers as I force more and more into his mouth and eventually into his throat. I push pass his gag reflex and stop when the head of my dick is nestled deep into his throat.
By now his breathing is very labored and I can see him slowing lose consciousness, but I’m far from caring.
I start to fuck his throat and right before he passes out I pull out stroking myself and kicking him back on his back. I thrust back into him and his mouth opens but nothing comes out, the moan trapped in his throat.
I lean down and lick a path from his neck to his ear.
“You’re such a bad slut Taemin.” I say grabbing his throat. “You’ll never be better than Kibum. Even Minho is a better fuck than you.”
And he starts to cry again...this time because of his hurt feelings.
I speed up and soon I can feel the coil in the pit of my stomach and with a few more thrust I’m cumming inside our maknae with images of Kibum sprawled out before me while I ride out my orgasm.
When I pull out I notice he’s still crying.
“P..please Hyung…take it off.”
I snarl but do it anyway, taking pity on the kid. Immediately his hand is on his dick pumping.
“AH HYUNG!” he moans out as cum shoots from his dick and lands onto his chest and stomach
I watch him with disinterest. He looks back at me before he hangs his head in shame looking at the mess he made of the floor.
“Clean this shit up.” I say walking away. “Oh and Taemin. Don’t come to me again.” I say looking back and there it is.
The look of utter despair, his spirit broken.
END