A secret to my grave : Chapter 4

[creamymint]

Title:  A secret to my grave

Author: creamymint

Pairing: Asami/Akihito

Spoilers: None… I guess?

Summary: "Why didn't you tell me, Akihito? Why?" Asami snarl dangerously, hovering over Akihito. "Even if I told you, you can't fix this Asami. Not this time."

Word Count: 1569

Disclaimer: All familiar characters belong to Yamane Ayano.

Author's note:  Uh,

Comments

[spiritphoenix92]

I was so excited when I saw this post up!!!! I promised myself no fanfic till after exams but I saw this post, so I did all my work as fast as I can so that I could read this post. Thank you. Good luck on your exams. I'll be waiting for your next post!!!!!!! <3

[creamymint]

I'm feel really honoured that you like the story this much :'D <3 Major goodluck on your exams~ I hope both of us succeed greatly! :D

[radcat38]

Don't worry about the time issue and updating. You do it when you can. Many people have taken years to write a story. Real life comes first. Sad to say but true!! ")
Good update. Love the Aki strategy and the allusions to chest strategy. Good work.
Enjoyed it. Liked the insights into Aki and Suoh and even the roundabout way into Asami's.
Nice seeing the love between A and A written through out your story.
Sad though cuz what eventually will happen.
Thinking of an Asami post Tabaka is kind of sad...I was thinking that while reading.
If Aki thought about it Asami's money could get him the lastest treatments and research..but fear keeps us
back from so much.
Nice work. Take the time you need to write and update. Good luck on school, exams, etc...
cat ")

[creamymint]

Yep, life does bite you in the ass sometimes XD
I glad that you like the interaction between the characters. Especially AxA. :D I'm trying to juice out the most believable action for both of them towards certain situations, it'll take a while before I can feel somehow satisfied with how it turned out.
I've a clear image of how Asami will react when he knew the truth. I like it, somehow... I just hope that everyone else feels that is a believable reaction from a man like Asami :D
Yes, if only Aki thought about it. But fear can move it in a way that you're blinded by everything else that is rational ;D

Thanks for the kind words! And thank you :D

[ameris57]

Loved it. Want to read more. See forward to the next chapter. big kisses and hugs.

[creamymint]

Glad that you like it~ <3 Thank for reading :D

[creamymint]

Hehe, no, thank you for reading~ ;D

[sara_matta]

[creamymint]

I'm glad~ Thx for reading :D