A secret to my grave : Chapter 5

[creamymint]

Title:  A secret to my grave

Author: creamymint

Pairing: Asami/Akihito

Spoilers: None… I guess?

Summary: "Why didn't you tell me, Akihito? Why?" Asami snarl dangerously, hovering over Akihito. "Even if I told you, you can't fix this Asami. Not this time."

Word Count: 2527

Disclaimer: All familiar characters belong to Yamane Ayano.

Author’s Note: Was

Comments

[mozaya]

thanks for the update, lucky you got to go to Korea*envy eyes* (never been there though hope someday i will)

i like the way Akihito is shown "controlling" Asami, or at least that he knows Asami well enough to get him to do something without knowing that it was what Akihito wanted. Not in a manipulative way (cold calculation), a lover way (knows how to handle Asami because he understand him). It really shows how their relationship evolved and how Akihito matured (not just a defenseless brat anymore).

i'm just afraid that it's gonna be all tragic till the end with the way you writing when i'm a fervent fan of miracles and happy endings... would be too sad to see Akihito dies when Asami loves him so much... please make it that Asami find out and by some miracle they end up happy forever *keep dreaming it'll happen*

btw loved the pocky shaped dildo lol and how Akihito responded^^

have a nice day, will be waiting impatiently for the next chapter:)

[creamymint]

You'll get there someday, I'm sure! But really, if you plan to go... go in autumn! Nami Island would look fantastic in autumn. Sadly, it's spring in May *sniffs* I only saw greens :'D

Yes, you're definitely getting it right :D I wrote this trying to figure out how Aki's mind works. For me he is not naive, but he act based on what he thinks is right in his book. Even if he tried to "control" Asami, he'll never be able to be the cold calculative type. He's someone who acts on emotions and will generally be effected by people's actions towards him (body language etc...), that's why he "controls" Asami by thinking how his lover will generally react if he does such things ;D

This is going to be a bit of a bumpy ride *gives tissues* Who knows what'll will happen... but from my point of view, it is somewhat... a happy end? (unless I'm twisted or something XD)

Thanks for reading~~ :D

[reallifesucks]

thank you for the update !

[creamymint]

thanks for reading~ :)

[nbsiren]

Thanks for updating! ^^

[creamymint]

thank you for reading~ :)

[vongolauchiha]

*CRIES* I DON'T WANT AKI-CHAN TO DIE!!!! *COMPLETELY BREAKS DOWN* Please don't kill him off my heart can't take it, have asami find him a cure!!!!! *Crawls into wardrobe and bawls heart out*

[creamymint]

*opens the wardrobe and gives tons of tissue* I'm sorry for making you brawl like that :'( Who knows what'll happen right?

Thanks for reading :)

[dyoklako]

Thank you for the update.

Looking forward to the next part. :)

LOL at the Korean class mishap. ^^;;;

[creamymint]

Thank you for reading~ ;D