What Can I Do? - Chapter 8: Desperation

Jan 15, 2015 23:24

Title: What Can I Do?
Rating: R/18
Disclaimer: I don’t own these characters.
Warnings: H/D slash, very smutty
Author's Notes: This is a much longer chapter this time, since the last two were so short. Thank you again to everyone who has left a comment!

Chapter 8 )

fic, draco malfoy, harry potter, what can i do

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minesomine January 16 2015, 09:09:27 UTC
Well... these two... ;)

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create_serenity January 16 2015, 18:35:38 UTC
They're so frustrating! :)

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lyonessheart January 16 2015, 15:10:35 UTC
those tow guys are delightfully difficult. i think Draco really would have never touched harry if he didn´t have to, and basically forcing him to bottom is not really something that endears Harry to me. just because he wants to fuck Draco doesn´t mean that he wants to get fucked right? If Draco would be curious that would be something different, but he doesn´t want it and doesn´t miss it. I knwo you´ll have Draco give in and beg for it but I wish he could hold back. Because these two need to work other issues out before really "sleeping" with each other

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create_serenity January 16 2015, 18:11:59 UTC
Hehe you're so right. When are these two ever sensible about working out their issues?

Actually I didn't like Harry much in this chapter either, he's being a bit of a prat to poor Draco, but don't worry he suffers for it too!

(Also as a side note I actually prefer Draco topping, it's just difficult to top all the time when you can't use your arms - how the hell would you balance or do anything at all? Stick with me here, it'll all work out!)

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create_serenity January 22 2015, 11:24:58 UTC
I just had to come back to this comment because I wrote a scene today for later in the fic that reminded me of it. Let's just say Harry won't be getting away with his behaviour :D

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laraflame January 16 2015, 20:42:44 UTC
Take Robert Downey Jr's advice seriously and post a new chapter soon! I love this story soo much, can't wait to read more of it!
These too are incredible, really. I'm sure this 'just sex' as they refer to it will be even more difficult between them when the curse will elapse.
I love them in each position but I always think about Harry as an ultimate bottom :D See, because he's never been loved in his childhood and I always imagine him as the one who needs more pampering :)

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create_serenity January 17 2015, 17:36:04 UTC
Hmm I'd never thought of it like that (Harry bottoming I mean). Good point!

I love your icon, every time I see it I feel the need to go write something. It's quite motivating :D

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ldydark1 January 16 2015, 21:00:50 UTC
Well, hot damn, girl! This was sweet, sizzling, sexy.
I can't figure out who is manipulating who...
Great chapter, thank you. :)

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create_serenity January 17 2015, 17:36:40 UTC
Hehe you and me both. I think they're both doing their fair share of it at the moment!

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