Paradox Two-Faced

[createbeauty]

    She could imagine the stories they would tell.  The words would be jumbled together, incomprehensible.  Never love, always hate.  No one knew her for she hid herself well.  Full of love and hopelessly romantic-how scandalous it all was.  A paradox two-faced.  An angel hidden beneath the monster’s black scales.  How could anyone know of the

Comments

[deadkerouac]

Wow. Great imagery. Great description of the face and all. And it put a sad feeling in my heart all the same. Because it's about sadness. I feel like hugging someone now, heh heh.

I'd like to read more of your stuff, it's fantastic. It inspires me to write more than I've been the past few weeks.

[createbeauty]

I appreciate the feedback. It seems the only time I'm motivated to write is when I feel utterly hopeless. Does that show in my writing?

Cheers.

[deadkerouac]

I caught a bit of hopelessness but not a whole lot. The piece is something a lot of people incl. myself can relate to. We've all been there. And when I'm feeling down, writing does calm me down quite a bit, or sometimes it pisses me off more. I really dug this piece :)

[createbeauty]

I really appreciate your words.
I cried a lot writing this piece. I spend so much time hiding my feelings and then... I don't know. An amazing person comes along and takes me by surprise and I change all my rules ... and as quickly as he comes, he leaves me broken and defeated.