here by me // twilight

[butteroffly]

 

Comments

[ofenjen]

You nailed Bella and Jacob, both. Excellent job - loved it!

[butteroffly]

I'm glad you think so! Thanks so much for taking the time to read and comment ♥

[xthemusicbox]

Very nice! You have a very detailed and interesting way of writing. It's clear and understandable, and keeps the reader, well, reading! (: The story is fitting, and you did a wonderful job with the portrayal of Bella. Excellent job! Can't wait to read some more! (:

[butteroffly]

Yay for keeping you reading :] I'm glad you like the story so far! Let's just hope I can keep it up ♥

[sequinnzz]

Fantastic! I loved it :)
Can't wait to read more X)

[butteroffly]

Thanks! ♥ The next chapter should be up soon (I'm procrastinating from work, hah)

[musicmind314]

I loved this!! I'm very intrigued with the storyline, though I am totally Team Edward. I usually don't read Twilight fanfic, but yours caught my eye. Can't wait to read the next chapter!!

[butteroffly]

Aww, I'm glad I've lured you over to fanfiction ^^ I'm Team .. err .. Both? There will definitely be more Edward in the next chapter ♥

[butteroffly]

Thank you! ♥